till next time

a memory snuck in through the radio

while i was looking in the rear view mirror

waiting at the red light

sweetly

i drink in the words like wine

feeling them warm me

dancing with them behind the wheel

do you remember?

it’s the one we listened to till the needle scratched the album

the noose of memory tightens

but not around my neck - - around my waist

where your arm used to linger

i can almost feel your warm breath

on that spot on my neck

my eyes shimmer with the sensual whimsy of it all

even now you bring me more than i hope for

more than i would dare ask for

but now the light is green

goodbye till next time…..

 

 

 

Reviews

[Cassie]

How did I miss this one? Or did i review it? Your poems are always new to me even if i read them everyday. I like how you ended it. The red light should have lingered so you write more...And by the way, did that music stop or another one came that jolted your memory back, if that's the case...I am waiting for a another poem, the likes of this one

[Lydia Shutter]

Cassie, I just love your reviews, sweet friend of mine. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Marianne Rose]

A great image of sitting at the stoplight, all that happening in a few minutes, the incredible life of the verse, the transformation of the noose around a neck to an arm around your waist, and I love the light turning green! A perfect ending.

[Lydia Shutter]

You are so kind. Thank you for the review. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice place described in the poetry. Old age taught me. Life is moments. We need to enjoy the good ones and make them last forever. Thank you Lydia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, we do, John. Thank you for reading and your review. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Lydia.

[Einstein Noodle]

"the noose of memory tightens
but not around my neck - - around my waist" great use of contrast and surprise ... you got me!! how music remains threaded through most lives ...special friends, situations even times alone "gettin' down to a tune and pounding the steering wheel not caring who sees ... makes me feel good Lydia ... real good to start my day!
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

There's no doubt drivers around me think I am a crazy old lady! LOL Thanks, my friend. Lydi**

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha! i see you girl! :)))

[SleeplessVolcano]

aahhh...I was playing with "rear-view mirror" in a poem lately....

you have painted such a lovely picture....with words and the suitably musical graphic....

I need to finish mine now...:)

[Lydia Shutter]

I hope you do. Thanks, Sleepless. Lydi**

[B. Boileau]

Absolutely the best! The way music triggers memories is unlike any other media, and you've perfectly described what sounds like a touching time. I loved this one !

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Bill. It is truly amazing how music can transport us to the time and place. Lydi**

[James]

This is great, a loving memory and a song to take you back, all in the time it takes for a light to change.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, James. Lydi**

[Alfred Kukitz]

The scenario bubbles in transparent wonder. You amaze me with words that add a sprig of lemon to a wonderful cool drink of memory.

Simply love your writing Lydia. I can't wait for the next one!

Regards,
Al

[Lydia Shutter]

Al, your review is downright poetic...." words that add a sprig of lemon to a wonderful cool drink of memory." Now you should write a poem with your line in it! :) Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Ana Papaya]

Funny how the memories are so real they can be felt.
The touches, the kisses, all those moments relived.
Some beautiful lines in this one Lydi. And the end is perfect.
As this person came back to steal you away for just a moment and leaving you to carry on, until the next time they visit your thoughts.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Papaya....like the new icon! Lydi**

[Ana Papaya]

You're welcome. Thank you Lydi, I needed comfortable walking shoes today. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Hey, at my age, I need them EVERY day! LOL

[zunie frost]

i just love the ending !!
very clever piece i must say

more than i would dare ask for
but now the light is green
goodbye till next time…..
these words touches my heart ..

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Zunie. Lydi**