Between

Between

A Poem by Lydia Shutter

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Somewhere deep

in the realm of betweens

you kissed me

between the summer and autumn of life

between the once dark sky

and a sparkling firmament

between lukewarm smiles

and sizzling passion


T=was there

you magically turned dandelions

into fragrant smelling roses - -

my heart no longer eluded capture

and an urgency to remain

in this realm of betweens

bugalooed down the Broadway

of my soul

© 2016 Lydia Shutter


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Hello Lydia,
Thought I would come over and say Hi! I can identify with this lovely appreciative hearted rendition to memories of appreciation in our lives time. So much has passed and so much to still learn and experience. Love is something which does take tending, watering, feeding to enjoy.................blessings in your life and writing. Kathy

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Such a lovely sentiment and review, Kathy. thank you very much. Lydi**



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Lukewarm smiles and sizzling passion, hurts like the dickens when they are no longer there. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

I'm sure this is a difficult time of year for you. I appreciate the fact you read my words.
Hello Lydia,
Thought I would come over and say Hi! I can identify with this lovely appreciative hearted rendition to memories of appreciation in our lives time. So much has passed and so much to still learn and experience. Love is something which does take tending, watering, feeding to enjoy.................blessings in your life and writing. Kathy

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Such a lovely sentiment and review, Kathy. thank you very much. Lydi**
As is often the case for those fortunate enough to experience it, those deep emotive feelings which are lavishly imbued when we find ourselves betwixt & between, a uniquely personal and special place, our very own twilight zone if you like, do leave a long and lasting imprint on the subconscious and one we can return too and reflect on in those surreal moments and once again savour that pleasant calm and understanding!

A superbly penned, reflective reverie that takes the reader to a higher plane !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Your reviews always make me feel special, Tom. Thanks so much. Lydi**
This is amazing ... brought back sweet memories :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Lydi**
I loved every line of this perfect poem. This is a brand new favorite!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Lisa. Just came home from being out of town for a week. Sorry this is so late. Ly.. read more
Love. There's something sweet in being unsure but sure that something feels good.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Thanks very much for the review. Lydi**
Beautiful sensory rhetoric with a pleasant prose. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

thanks, J.M. Lydi**
This was short and sweet but strong; it encouraged me to feel what you felt! love it !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Thank you. Lydi**
Beautiful! "between lukewarm smiles and sizzling summers'' My favorite.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Thank you, James. Lydi*
Beautiful, vivid and superbly imaginative memories of heart, mind and soul Lydi.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Nemo. Lydi**

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