Without the Music

Just remembering.....

Artwork by Ziad Jundi

It was a music infused time spiced with a lack of decorum

 

Do you remember?

 

Like a sommelier pours the finest wine

you poured free flowing melodies into my cupped palms

 

Words suckled from the curl of your ardent lips

would sustain me for more days than I care to recall

 

Libidinous notes romped on the bridge of your guitar

stonewalling till they felt it was suitable to dive

onto your waiting fingers

 

Some said you were yin and I was yang

indeed the fine line

separating the words from the music often blurred

 

Tonight, mon amour, I was the one who remembered

Qui, mais les mots ne signifient rien sans la musique.

Yes, but the words mean nothing without the music

 

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Lydia,
"without the music" Harmony exists or does not. Relation-ally people seek this as you said" ying and yang"
To be able to rest in peace with another is something to be treasure and nurtured. I read your poem and found myself realyy looking inside of myself. Thank you for this one...............great poem! Blessings Kathy

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Kathy. Lydi**

[emmajoy]

' Libidinous notes romped .. .. .. .. .. till they felt it was suitable to dive onto your waiting fingers'

Such a melodious and intelligent write, Lydi. Your use of words, the addition of one of the most romantic of all languages, the sweet passion, the pairing of music with lyricism is super fantastic. Your poetry is just... magick! Love it start to finis, now leave, sighing happily..

Great graphic too, by the way.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks for noticing the graphic, Emma....I really do search for just the right one to complement my words. Your comment is a rhyming one. Finis/happily! :) I appreciate the time you take with my words. Thank you, Emma. Lydi**

[emmajoy]

Can't see the point of a review - however few words, unless one reads between the spaces! Off into the damp, dreary world now.. oh to bathe in the warmth and light of wotds - or something equally relaxing.. :)

[Lisa Lindsey]

Lyrics and melody is a beautiful couple and when they unite to make a love song it is very special. Yes, I remember too. Where would our lives be without the music and the inspiration behind them? They inspire you still. Wonderful poetry, Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Lisa. Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

"Libidinous notes romped on the bridge of your guitar
stonewalling till they felt it was suitable to dive
onto your waiting fingers"

It's the dance of the drums, the bass and that beat that strums us along...intoxicating lines, Lydi. I love it!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Kelly. Enjoy your day. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

I do understand this poem my friend.
"Tonight, mon amour, I was the one who remembered
Qui, mais les mots ne signifient rien sans la musique.
Yes, but the words mean nothing without the music"
The above lines. Are wonderful. Thank you Lydia for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

John, I always appreciate your wonderful reviews. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Lydia.

[Paul Bell]

I think Yin and Yang relationships give out a real beat.
Unpredictable but exciting.

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, my friend. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[M.E.Lyle]

It's like The Beatles without a beat. Who would ever go for "She loves you, yeah, yeah, yeah."

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much for the review. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydia... the music flows... played by our heart strings...
as though our mind has wings. Beautiful poetry.
truly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Pat. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it is like Simon's words without Artie's harmonies...

the ying needs the yang...

melodious write...but so true...two people who are meant to be together make the most beautiful music together...even if they have to get past a few harsh notes once in a while.

j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, when Paul and Art split, it was never the same. Thank you so much for your review, Jacob. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Art work and poem are so beautiful. A package of musicality to the ears. A wondrous pen and instrument...Much loved and enjoyed...:).................

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Sami. You are a gem. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. Gracie Mille...:)...................