forevermore

forevermore

A Poem by Lydia



photography by ilya rashap







was it his quiet intelligence drawing me further into his arms?

perhaps....

was it his discerning sensuality that seduced me?

possibly...

all that is certain is a constellation of butterflies

in varying shapes and sizes swam through my veins

revolving and then spinning like multicolored divas

repeatedly whispering his name in pitch perfect harmony

when i awakened from the remnants of my dream

the effervescence of stars danced upon my tongue

            that’s why

the pockets of my jeans are blissfully filled

with the magic of romantic moons

overflowing with the scent of his cologne on my pillow

cascading memories of the morning after the night before linger

                        right there…

tickling the spot on my hip that belongs to HIM

forevermore


© 2017 Lydia



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dear Lydia... a constellation of butterflies ... revolving and then spinning like multicolored divas repeatedly whispering his name in pitch perfect harmony... The pockets of my jeans are blissfully filled with the magic of romantic moons... I can experience it all from the deck of a ship on the high seas of a dream. I hold these lines
as tangible proof that life is delectable.
truly, Pat

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

8 Months Ago

Truly, life IS delectable, my friend. Thank you so much for this lovely review. Lydi**


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This absolutely dripped with imagery... Enhanced by your near perfect breath and bars, syllable count and rhymes, I was entranced the whole way through... Perhaps, possibly, most insatiably our thirst for feeling can be articulated so neatly... Beautifully penned...

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much for this review, Noize. Lydi**
Silente

7 Months Ago

You are so very welcome
I loved the way you made the description come alive. Create beautiful places and visions for the reader. Thank you Lydia for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

8 Months Ago

John, you are so kind. Thank you. Lydi**
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Lydia.
Just beautiful Lydi. Wonderful imagery tone and flow.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

8 Months Ago

Thanks very much, Troy. Lydi**
Poetic imagery vividly conveyed in this fine poem! Well penned, Lydi!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

8 Months Ago

Thank you, Robert. Lydi**
When you write like this, it is as intoxicating as anything I could ever drink. One could derive many pleasures from the simple orchestration of such words.

Much applause!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

8 Months Ago

We belong to a mutual admiration society, my friend. Thank you so much. Lydi**
Nyc one..................

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

8 Months Ago

I assume you mean "nice" and not New York City? :) Thanks. Lydi**
Srishti Agrawal

8 Months Ago

Yes...ofcourse....its"nice" 😃
Wow...loved every bit of it....
The memory of the night...the smell on the pillow....the butterflies ....just had this beautiful story painted in front of the reader....love the way you write

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

8 Months Ago

Thank you very much, Ria. Lydi**
dear Lydia... a constellation of butterflies ... revolving and then spinning like multicolored divas repeatedly whispering his name in pitch perfect harmony... The pockets of my jeans are blissfully filled with the magic of romantic moons... I can experience it all from the deck of a ship on the high seas of a dream. I hold these lines
as tangible proof that life is delectable.
truly, Pat

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

8 Months Ago

Truly, life IS delectable, my friend. Thank you so much for this lovely review. Lydi**
Lydi, not only is this an ode to romance but the sheer beauty of it is breathtaking, I smiled when I read this as I usually do reading your writing :) You are an amazing writer, this shows all aspects of love, so beautifully done :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

8 Months Ago

And you, dear Poppy, are an amazing friend. Thank you. Lydi**
Very dreamlike... I'm not quite sure how love chemistry works but when there's attraction it can be very intoxicating. Very beautiful word Lydi.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

8 Months Ago

I don't think there is a specific formula! Thanks, Ana. Lydi**

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