the night undressed me

the night undressed me

A Poem by Lydia


artwork by harry weisburd




i remember being barefoot ‘neath the stars

then the night undressed me

at least that is what i told myself afterwards

 

since there was no other logical explanation

i was wrapped in the lace of sizzling urges

a raiment of intense desire encased my world

my very essence now controlled by passion’s dance

 

ah, the surrealistic charisma of the night

the magic of arousal held my breath

i thirsted for your kiss- your touch

you were the object of my lust

providing a bacchanalia worthy of dionysus

willingly i stepped off the cliff’s edge

falling into a fantasy

 

truly that is how it happened

when the night undressed me

and for a few glorious moments

concupiscence ruled my world

 


© 2017 Lydia



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how did I miss this erotically delightful poem Lydi... I love it when the night rules us thusly, touching us and then watching the fall... such wondrous joy it is to be so undressed and ruled... but of course we must blame it on something... that darn night baring us to all those eyes who are just jealous of that surreal magic...

you know Lydi, I love your fantasy, it is always just so damn "nice" and shiverlicious giving me goosebumps...

redzone

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Year Ago

"Shiverlicious!" Love that word!!! Of course it can't be MY fault...has to be the night....or per.. read more



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Sensuality flowing smoothly in this write! Your words make the night play its magic on the readers taking them on the their romantic voyage.. For a few moments we also flow away in this lovely poetry.thank you Lydia ,for sharing this fine piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Lydia

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Bala. Your reviews are consistently kind. Lydi**
Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

Thepleasure is always mine.
The night brings our emotional need to satisfy
The day brings the joy which fills the heart.
Without the balance, we cannot enjoy the feelings we express now in such a graceful way.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Lydia

1 Year Ago

Thanks for stopping by, Mona. Lydi**
From the very first line, the reader gets feel of seeing an often played and favoured memory being painted, that captures us all into the wish that we felt it too. The ending must be written in invisible ink though, as it definitely ended in my ears with a happy sigh :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Lydia

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Nemo...nice new photo you have! Lydi**
Lorry

1 Year Ago

Thanks Lydi, thought it was about time to put a face to the face :)
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Pax
there;'s something about the night that makes many of us enthusiastic in sensual needs or any other things... this piece is quite intense..

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Lydia

1 Year Ago

Thanks very much for your review. Lydi**
yes, blame the night....:)

it's a Friday night sensual gem...the personification is lively in this piece...

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Lydia

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much, Jacob. Lydi**
Your poetry is medicinal and far reaching Lydi. You have such a genuine expression of flow and beauty that it leaves its mark for a long time, tenderly captivating :)

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Lydia

1 Year Ago

Hope that mark is not black and blue! :) Thank you very much, Poppy. Lydi**
PoppySilver

1 Year Ago

Only rose coloured lol My pleasure hon :)
Gentle, beautiful and wonderful places you took the reader with. Thank you Lydia for sharing the amazing poetry for love.
Coyote

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Year Ago

John, I appreciate your review. Thank you. Lydi**
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Lydia.
'.. for a few glorious moments ~ concupiscence ruled my world.'

You cook up the most delicious of feasts, Lydi.. but then, you use the finest ingredients! Can there be anything more incredible than post heart.loving language? (Don't answer that, my dear friend)

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Lydia

1 Year Ago

:) I wouldn't dream of it! Thank you so much, Emma. Lydi**
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

Smiling, not daring to read your thoughts. Oops, too late, one just popped up, tis luverly!
Breathtaking.
You are indeed a true goddess of sensual poetry.
Need I say more?

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Lydia

1 Year Ago

Shabeeh, thank you so much. Lydi**
Whoa! Radiance showering the brilliant landscape of lust, desire and fantasy. Mesmerizing!

Regards,
Al

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Lydia

1 Year Ago

Al, always happy to see your words on my page. Thank you. Lydi**
Alfred Kukitz

1 Year Ago

I stored this one away. Whoa!

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