the night undressed me

the night undressed me

A Poem by Lydia


artwork by harry weisburd




i remember being barefoot ‘neath the stars

then the night undressed me

at least that is what i told myself afterwards

 

since there was no other logical explanation

i was wrapped in the lace of sizzling urges

a raiment of intense desire encased my world

my very essence now controlled by passion’s dance

 

ah, the surrealistic charisma of the night

the magic of arousal held my breath

i thirsted for your kiss- your touch

you were the object of my lust

providing a bacchanalia worthy of dionysus

willingly i stepped off the cliff’s edge

falling into a fantasy

 

truly that is how it happened

when the night undressed me

and for a few glorious moments

concupiscence ruled my world

 


© 2017 Lydia



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how did I miss this erotically delightful poem Lydi... I love it when the night rules us thusly, touching us and then watching the fall... such wondrous joy it is to be so undressed and ruled... but of course we must blame it on something... that darn night baring us to all those eyes who are just jealous of that surreal magic...

you know Lydi, I love your fantasy, it is always just so damn "nice" and shiverlicious giving me goosebumps...

redzone

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Months Ago

"Shiverlicious!" Love that word!!! Of course it can't be MY fault...has to be the night....or per.. read more



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A very sensual and beautiful poem on the Night. Darkness as it falls, brings with it dreams and sensations of a mystical and passionate kind. I love this aspect of the Night. Superbly written Lydi. ❤

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

7 Months Ago

Thanks so much, Divya. Lydi**
Full of absolute palpable atmosphere. One can feel it on one's skin. Lovely Lydi.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Ken. Lydi**
Indeed a proscribed activity Lydi! Sensual, intelligent and elegant in its portrayal of desire, lust and abandon.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John Alexander McFadyen

8 Months Ago

I agree however 'concupiscence. is generally held to be "inclination or innate tendency of human bei.. read more
Lydia

7 Months Ago

Concupiscence, in my dictionary, is defined as "strong sexual desire; lust." I still say passion is.. read more
John Alexander McFadyen

7 Months Ago

Oh I agree. In short supply at times lol!
A deposition of wild abandon laced with the most wonderful vocabulary and tied in a bow of lusty passion Lydia - and it's not even Friday - well I mean...it's Friday somewhere in the world..right?

Pure class my friend.
:))

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

8 Months Ago

Oh, it is Friday in India, China, Japan, and other places....so why not? :) Thanks very much, Tony.. read more

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