all i see

all i see

A Poem by Lydia


artwork by talantbek chekirov




i sketched myself with charcoal

from the day before forever

and then there was you

painting me with watercolors

delivering me into a world

bubbling with soothing hues

life was electric

filled with stardust and glitter moments

you brought waves to my lakes

injected laughter into my same-old same-old

even moths were drawn

to the windows of my soul

that’s why even now

when night falls

and my eyelids close over my heart

all i see is you


© 2017 Lydia



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Beautifully painted words and memories Lydi. What a wonderful journey your trips to memory lane are, it must be wonderful to think back to those rainbow and glitter days, as you look at those rainbow and glitter days memories.
I guess now this piece now becomes part of those same memories too, ready to be played each time it is read again. Lovely.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

5 Days Ago

Thank you for visiting and your comments, Neo. Lydi**



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beautiful and romantic. I loved this.

Posted 9 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

2 Hours Ago

Thank you very much. Lydi**
Now you know I'm going to enjoy a poem that mentions drawing and romance in the same write. But to do it so well is so much extra.

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

22 Hours Ago

Thank you, Ken. I always appreciate your reviews. Lydi**
your words here are a sweet caress to that special one. pleasantly powerful ointment to the soul. this leaves no doubt - all in.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Days Ago

Thank you so much, Pete. Lydi**
what beautiful and romantic verse... it shines with the colors of you... this poem must have been written in those bright acrylics that laugh out loud with the love you express, I mean if someone brings waves to your waters, and laughter then even a sigh and "nice" doesn't match the feelings and emotions painted in this poem... just flat out wonderful Lydi...

redzone

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Days Ago

Thank you so much, Curt. Your reviews always make me feel so talented! Lydi**
redzone

4 Days Ago

well Lydi I don't think it is going out on a limb to say YES you are SO talented... ;0)
Lydia

4 Days Ago

Thank you, my friend. You are the official President of my fan club! :)
What an amazing tribute to the one you love,

you paint your poetry in vivid color.

Very nice,
Trace

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Days Ago

Trace, always happy to see you smiling face on my page. Thank you very much. Lydi**
Wau! a beautiful as ever!
I was missing your silk lovely words

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

5 Days Ago

You are so kind, Angelina. Thank you. Lydi**
This is really sweet, i need your kind of inspiration

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

5 Days Ago

Thank you once again, Cassie. Lydi**

dear Lydi... I feel the ambiance of affection as colors glow in your perfection. There are people who fill you with stardust and glitter moments.
"When your eyelids close over your heart ..." a seashell of love is a treasure discovered. truly, Pat

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

5 Days Ago

Thank you so much, Pat. I always appreciate your lovely words. Lydi**
Beautifully painted words and memories Lydi. What a wonderful journey your trips to memory lane are, it must be wonderful to think back to those rainbow and glitter days, as you look at those rainbow and glitter days memories.
I guess now this piece now becomes part of those same memories too, ready to be played each time it is read again. Lovely.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

5 Days Ago

Thank you for visiting and your comments, Neo. Lydi**
incredibly romantic, Lydi..

one beside us has that capability to color in the sketches...and make the so so, become wow wow...

i really like the idea of "eyelids close over my heart"---

j.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

5 Days Ago

the so so becomes wow wow....love the way you said that! Thanks so much, Jacob. Lydi**

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