chardonnay

chardonnay

A Poem by Lydia Shutter
"

fridays are not quite what they used to be, but....

"





the heat of an unclothed fantasy

renders the air sweet

words kiss my palms

flashy pheromones flow

secreted syllables samba cautiously

i read my words aloud

rolling my tongue over them

to taste omissions - - swallow errors

to perhaps uncover that certain dash of elan

then have an affair with it


but alas, blank verse and end rhyme

argue uncontrollably on the page before me

till the glittering voltage of a marginal metaphor

gives aerodynamic power

to yet another crumpled morsel of linen bond

indeed, slumber will find me

after i pledge my love and devotion

to only my trusty chardonnay

 

© 2017 Lydia Shutter


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I'm not sure, but I gather this Friday night was less than satisfying becuz you fell asleep with your empty goblet instead of your hunny? *smile* As always, your sensual style is exquisite & your writing wordplay rivals Jacob, both of you with amazingly smooth & original literary metaphors!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

6 Years Ago

Nah, poetry is not always a reflection of real life...as you know. I don't even drink alcohol! :) .. read more



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Your words remind me of "To be, nor not to be"; that is the question of what form of poetry shall one choose for a particular moment, or to convey a special thought. It is an easy answer for some as they write only in one form, but the variety we have as poets is a gift.

Just as the winsome face peers into the lined up glasses of wine, we may drink from one of the other, or take a sip from all. Love and devotion as this allows the writer to create lasting imagery, just as you have with your words!
And isn't it wonderful that we may use that crumpled piece of linen bond to wipe up the spills? LOL

Wonderful............as always!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lydia Shutter

6 Years Ago

It is always a treat to get one of your reviews! Yes, we have many choices as poets, but I seem to .. read more
Sheila Kline

6 Years Ago

OMG, it just might be me but my Foster Grants won't tell.........LOL I remain an enigma.
Lydia Shutter

6 Years Ago

Never change, my friend!
"secreted syllables samba cautiously" love it!!! so disappointed with the twist in your closing .. thank goodness for the "trusty chardonnay" at least ...what a fine poem says i .. so much to savor and enjoy ...your classy and fine Lydia ...it shouts through in your poems but especially this one says i!
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

6 Years Ago

'.. till the glittering voltage of a marginal metaphor ~ gives aerodynamic power ~ to yet another crumpled morsel of linen bond .. '

There's something special about a full glass of anything. There's something exceptional about a half glass that's converted expectation to unmitigated pleasure. As does your words. This poem really is poetry of the best vintage - always wanted to type that.. now's the time. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

6 Years Ago

I didn't want to offend your neighbours to be honest. Had remembered you don't drink! Think i spill.. read more
Lydia Shutter

6 Years Ago

LOL making me laugh!
emmajoy

6 Years Ago

Good, laughter steadies the hand!

Must disappear before i take root.. here to repa.. read more
Good wine and good company make good poetry too. Nice flow of thoughts led to perfect ending. Thank you Lydia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much, John. Lydi**
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Lydia.
being a free verse lover...i especially like the last stanza..

but love the "secreted syllables doing the samba"---
oh yes, it's Friday...with a nip of wine.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

6 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Jacob. Lydi**
Lydi, you remind me of an adept juggler the way you execute words into the context of a poem. You truly shine in this one!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Kelly. Have a great weekend. Lydi**
I can appreciate the irony here in this lovely smooth piece. And although I don't drink anymore I can still remember thanks to pieces such as this. An excellent use of metaphor.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ken Simm.

6 Years Ago

I know I must have one of the best oxymorns ever. A collection of Whiskies. I don't drink any of the.. read more
Lydia Shutter

6 Years Ago

Life does not have to make logical sense, my friend. It is far more interesting when it does not.read more
Ken Simm.

6 Years Ago

Mainly gifts from people who don't know I don't drink. I sometimes get them out and look at them how.. read more

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