vibrant

vibrant

A Poem by Lydia


artwork by hessam abrishami







the colors were more vibrant then

stars sat on the horizon twinkling just for us

the wind put wheels on palm fronds

allowing us to drive to who knew

            or who cared

                        where

every moment was an adventure

you were my sustenance

through so many mouth-watering days

                        and nights

the florescent glow of a gas station’s neon sign

served as a lighthouse

leading us to the next wonderful experience

the next memory to be made

you were perpetual motion

i was insatiable energy

looking back i can see it all clearly

we were stowaways on a derailed dream

but it was our dream

we made everything out of nothing

truth is

even though it had to end

i wouldn’t have wanted it any other way


© 2017 Lydia



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Kind, sweet and wonderful words for love.
"i was insatiable energy
looking back i can see it all clearly
we were stowaways on a derailed dream"
To be stowaways in the arms of love. No better place to know. Thank you dear Lydia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

This means a lot from you, John....I consider you a wonderful romance writer. Lydi**
Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

Was a amazing poem my friend.



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This reminds me of those first love moments. When you notice everything around...all things are alive and bursting with energy from the love you have inside. Part of you knowing it isn't forever.....but hoping you never have to let go. This is a superb write...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

Thanks very much, Tracey. I appreciate your review. Lydi**
oh my...this made me think of her...the one from the citing sources poem...

thank you for that...

j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

We all have that "one"...I am convinced of it. Thank you, Jacob. Lydi**
Poetic recollection glimpses of a more vibrant life experience – the shades of love my fade with time, but the memories live on most effervescent … lovely penned piece …. :-)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

Thanks so much, Phill. Lydi**
i know the adventure ..but it is so sad ..your poem is so sad to me :( there is so much unfinished business in a derailed dream .. circumstances....personal choices ... ohhhhhh hell :(
and i so relate to the "wouldn’t have wanted it any other way" .. in fact we still talk from time to time ;) this right here:
"you were perpetual motion
i was insatiable energy" is a bee hive asking to be poked ...
where the hell is my stick? ;))))
E.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

Always get a smile out of your reviews, E! Thank you so much. Lydi**
Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

also love the painting ..its very warm and comforting ..
Lydia

1 Month Ago

Thanks, E!
Amazing reminiscence piece with pathos and such expression captured to tell the moment so well. Love the picture, so apt!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

Thanks very much, John. I always appreciate your reviews. Lydi**

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