i tumbled

i tumbled

A Poem by Lydia





my throat caught a fly ball

my heart played hopscotch

the setting sun reflected off the windshield of his truck

                        framing him for my viewing pleasure

in that instant the rest of the world

was thrown into deep dark shadows

yet there he was

            sparkling in my eyes

           oh yes!!

my golden fantasy man

twilight throbbed in my veins

as he removed his Foster Grants and smiled that perfect smile

savoring that precise moment

             packaging it in a velvet drawstring sac

i tumbled into a fantasy i felt certain would last a lifetime 


© 2017 Lydia



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Here you delightfully describe the way I fall in love pretty regularly. I love the way you capture each little nuance of the scene & express it vividly. There's this certain "look" that many of us have, where we're more likely to have a meltdown *heh! heh! heh!* Fondly Margie

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Lydia

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Thanks so much, Margie. Keep falling in love...it will keep you young! :) Lydi**



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If I wrote down my fantasies...(Sigh) words wouldnt be enough, I would have to paint them. This is to say, I love your description, the way you jot it down...I give a thumbs up!

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Lydia

2 Days Ago

Thanks so much, Cassie. Lydi**
Here you delightfully describe the way I fall in love pretty regularly. I love the way you capture each little nuance of the scene & express it vividly. There's this certain "look" that many of us have, where we're more likely to have a meltdown *heh! heh! heh!* Fondly Margie

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Lydia

1 Week Ago

Thanks so much, Margie. Keep falling in love...it will keep you young! :) Lydi**
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Gee
Lydia !!! And what are you to do with him if he lands , smiling, into your lap ??? No, don't tell me I blush easily.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Lydia

2 Weeks Ago

Giggling here.....perhaps a bit evilly! :) Thank you, Gee. Lydi**
Gee

2 Weeks Ago

My pleasure
Lol, I'm glad to be walking instead of driving when I see this, myself! I'm telling you, I know exactly where this comes from, Lydi...and I thank you for giving it poetic justice for women everywhere!

; )

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Lydia

2 Weeks Ago

:) Kelly, always a pleasure to see a review from you....we are on the same wavelength! Hope all is.. read more
What a sly rhyming format you use... Clear-cut and expensive feeling... A vivid detailing of that fleeting fantasy that lasts for as long as the mind lets it... Very precise, I like it...

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Lydia

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you very much, Silente. Lydi**
Silente

2 Weeks Ago

My pleasure...
oh how the imaginations fly ... such a fleeting moment yet unfurls fire and heat ;) your poem has captured it marvelously .. enjoy the language Lydia! well done says i!
E.

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Lydia

2 Weeks Ago

E, I always appreciate your lovely reviews. Thank you so much. Lydi**
How you do it time and time again Lydi, is almost beyond words, but then, without our words we would lose our craft. I'm in the cab behind checking out the blonde, checking out the guy in the truck up front.

As you may have guessed, I am also curious about what else is in that velvet drawstring sac & so shall read on....N

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Lydia

2 Weeks Ago

Ah, but I will never tell, my friend! :) Thanks for your always wonderful reviews. Lydi**
Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Quite right too & my pleasure. N
A portrayal so stunning of a beaitiful man, poetry in motion, your words enhanced to glory by the accompanyimg artwork. A treat for all to read.

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Lydia

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Divya! Lydi**
It is amazing how our chemistry works and how those juices flow upon mid stream of desires. It all feels like you want to catch something so bad but it is fleeting from your mind grasp. Very romantic.

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Lydia

2 Weeks Ago

Sami, I appreciate your reviews very much. Thank you. Lydi**
Sami Khalil

2 Weeks Ago

You are welcome.

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