you are my song

artwork by gary benfield

you are my song

a melody lilting in the background

everyday of my life

 

at times my ears reach for the notes

longing to hold them

while i run through the sand

 

the song creeping through my window

on a balmy summer night

humming storms into my dreams

 

the song bruising me with its jagged crescendo

then massaging my pain

as it kisses my skin

 

my flesh sings you

every curious passage

a mystery inscribed on my soul

 

my song

Reviews

[emmajoy]

If only one could buy love like this or even the understanding of how it can be if one allowed it. Lydi.. this poem is full of how it should be, how sweet feelings can fill hearts, can mke love real. My dear friend, you could bring peace to the world. Beautifully laid, and one knows, sincere..

[Lydia Shutter]

If only it was within my power to bring peace to the world, Emma....if only. Yes, this is how love should be and I am fortunate to know that firsthand. Thank you for your review. Lydi***

[CD Campbell]

To be longed for in such a full exquisite way is a priceless gift. Such a poem is the height of flattery that is done as well as anything in this world could be. Very moving. CD

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, CD. Lydi**

[Ken Simm.]

Just simply beautiful. I can say no more and nothing more needs to be said.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Ken. I appreciate your visits. Lydi**

[Cassie]

Awww...over the years, your poetry daily speaks to me

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Cassie. Lydi**

[Cassie]

I will definitely miss reading you my friend

[SJ Roebling]

This reminds me of a beautiful nocturne, reminiscent of my childhood dreams and the reading of Winkin, Blinkin and Nod. Dreamily incredible!

[Lydia Shutter]

What a lovely review, SJ. Thank you. Lydi**

[barleygirl]

This is a stunning outpouring of love! One of my favorites of yours that I've read so far. I love the way you use the full spectrum of feelings -- not just the candy-sweet stuff. I also love the way you craft the music metaphor thru-out. SO INTENSE: "the song bruising me with its jagged crescendo" as well as the following 2 lines!!!! Just plain stunning! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Margie! Lydi**

[Dara]

Such wonderful imagery. Your words literally flow off the page like a melody. I also love the rhythm and the passion behind each line. Simply beautiful, Lydi.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Dara. Lydi**

[Einstein Noodle]

the sting of memories coming from nowhere yet those memories the balm ..love this moment spent reading ...so wistfully romantic and soothing ..intriguing Lydia .. very cool!
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, E....always appreciate your visits. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

Gorgeous poem and painting. You give us double treats and enlighten us poetry, music and art.
You have great passions. Excellent.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Sami. I appreciate the time you take to read me. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

loved the way you used personification in this piece...such movement.
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Jacob! Lydi**