no rhyme no reason

no rhyme no reason

A Poem by Lydia



photo by marianne ang










no rhyme

no reason

long raindrops see-saw on the window

palm fronds breathe a sigh of relief

released from the sauna of the day

stars smile on night owls

and i watch

remembering the poetry of your face

like a window into a world of art

a world bursting in brilliant hues

a world waiting to paint my colorless rooms

and so it did

and really still does

with no rhyme

                                no reason

 


© 2018 Lydia



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You can turn any moment, into a moment of gracefulness and gratitude, the mystical feelings of love, those feelings that raise our senses, burst our hesrts, flowing our ink... how gorgeously You've painted one of these moments, how sensitively and yearningly You've said it all, how Your feelings come into free words with no rules, just written, as Your heart whispers them to You. another splendid piece of beauty, Thank You*

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Light. Your review made my morning brighter. Lydi**



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"and i watch remembering the poetry of your face"
I cannot think of a more beautiful, endearing way to describe a love one. Your poems have a way of touching the senses, creating images with just the right words. Reading this put a much needed smile on my face this morning. Thank you for sharing your love and your light through your poetry, Lydi.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

7 Months Ago

Dara, I appreciate your review so very much. Thank you. Lydi**
The charm of this piece continues to enchant.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

7 Months Ago

Thanks so much, Allen. I appreciate your visit. Lydi**
This is a rather nice, possibly in my favourites list of the week. Good job.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

9 Months Ago

Thanks, Zak. Lydi**
ZakLeonRamsey

9 Months Ago

No problem ;)
Magniff write here, its' memorizing
most enjoyable read here.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

9 Months Ago

Thanks so much. Lydi**
I like the use of your title like book ends of this poem, kind of brings it full circle. No rhyme or reason implies the almost random manner of life, nature, and in the case of this poem, love as well it seems.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

9 Months Ago

Love has no set rules....no pre-determined path to follow. Thanks for the review, Ewan. Lydi**
Just because- it is..wonderful when there’s no reason needed it just is deep inside and everywhere- lovely words🌹

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

9 Months Ago

I appreciate your review. Thanks so much. Lydi**
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

9 Months Ago

My pleasure🌹
You can turn any moment, into a moment of gracefulness and gratitude, the mystical feelings of love, those feelings that raise our senses, burst our hesrts, flowing our ink... how gorgeously You've painted one of these moments, how sensitively and yearningly You've said it all, how Your feelings come into free words with no rules, just written, as Your heart whispers them to You. another splendid piece of beauty, Thank You*

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Light. Your review made my morning brighter. Lydi**
This is so beautiful & graceful, the actual words themselves, the way you arrange them to look & sound, it's all so artfully done! I'm in continual awe as your words caress my eyeballs & my synapses, clear to my feeble brain, waking up something simple & primal there! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

9 Months Ago

Hey, that's me...simple and primal! LOL I truly appreciate your reviews, Margie. Thanks so much. .. read more
Love the image! Exhale and be the moment...see, feel, remember...you are there. A delicate whisper of a poem with intricate form, repetition and lovely flowand cadence. Imagery mesmerizes-“palm fronds breathe a sigh of relief” and so do we as we read your lyrical words..”remembering the poetry of your face”- brilliant. Brava my friend!


Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

9 Months Ago

We are lucky we can be "Grandmas at the pool!" The weather has been hotter than usual this winter!
Annette Pisano-Higley

9 Months Ago

We absolutely are Lydi. My kids & grandboys just flew back to NY yesterday morning to 3 inches of sn.. read more
Lydia

9 Months Ago

Me neither!
"no rhyme no reason" an amazing poem by a extremely talented poet Lydia...great job!!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Govind. Lydi**

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