no rhyme no reason

no rhyme no reason

A Poem by Lydia



photo by marianne ang










no rhyme

no reason

long raindrops see-saw on the window

palm fronds breathe a sigh of relief

released from the sauna of the day

stars smile on night owls

and i watch

remembering the poetry of your face

like a window into a world of art

a world bursting in brilliant hues

a world waiting to paint my colorless rooms

and so it did

and really still does

with no rhyme

                                no reason

 


© 2018 Lydia



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You can turn any moment, into a moment of gracefulness and gratitude, the mystical feelings of love, those feelings that raise our senses, burst our hesrts, flowing our ink... how gorgeously You've painted one of these moments, how sensitively and yearningly You've said it all, how Your feelings come into free words with no rules, just written, as Your heart whispers them to You. another splendid piece of beauty, Thank You*

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Light. Your review made my morning brighter. Lydi**



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I drew in my breath at the first line and didn't exhale fully till the last line, the way you marvelously build and culminate a thought. You created a poetic master piece again, so effortlessly and yet so elegantly.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Months Ago

Divya, you are so kind. Thank you very much! Lydi**
Hi Lydia, This was a colorful piece! It sounds to me that your day dreaming out the window had plenty of rhyme and reason. I enjoyed every word I read! However, in this piece and some of your other pieces you're a bit light on punctuation. Poetry needs it too. I'm simply passing that on to you from an old friend writer of mine that told me the same. LOL! Best wishes I love your style!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Months Ago

Thank you, John....and while I appreciate your suggestion, you will not see punctuation in my poetry.. read more
John Ciarmello

4 Months Ago

lol I feel the same way Hahaha only I'm a big chicken!
see no punc lol
You have a knack for marrying just the right illustration with the delivery of your words. I adore the black and white photography, and the "see-saw of raindrops" that offer up an indelible image. Oh, and THOSE lips...utterly intoxicating!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Months Ago

Kelly, you always choose the right artwork yourself. We have that in common. Thanks so much for th.. read more
Beautiful. It needs no rhymes for its made its reason known. There's no reason for something to be beautiful, after all. I love this.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Lavi. Lydi**
I love how this is short and sweet (and without rhyme or reason) but still gets the job done in an efficient way (creating a visual for the reader and telling a story). I love it but I love rhyme as well lol

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Months Ago

Thanks so much for your review...there is a place for rhyme, no doubt. Lydi**
wow this is an amazing poem. you write so well, it has captured a side of me with the words used.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much for your review. Lydi**
a world waiting to paint my colorless rooms
and so it did
and really still does
with no rhyme
no reason

So Beautiful Lydi as always :))

Some people just leave us feeling like this... and its always so special.. to recall that love..


Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Months Ago

We are fortunate if we can recall such a love, my friend. Thank you so much for the review. Lydi**
Wording, flow, word choices, and just over all feel of this poem are all a big hit. This is a great piece, and one that I think will be read for quite a long time. I know that it's pieces like this that remind me why it's so rewarding to be doing this. Great job.
-Richard

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Months Ago

Richard, thank you so much for this lovely review! Lydi**
dear Lydia... the art of love... the passion of colors... holding a masterpiece... signed and cherished... with brush strokes remembered. truly, Pat

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much for visiting today, Pat. I always appreciate your reviews. Lydi**
one of my favorites of yours, Lydi.

the raindrops see-sawing on the window---they are doing that right now on mine
and the really warm temperatures of today...have become cold...as i think of colorless rooms and a special friend i lost so many years ago...the poetry of her face...and artist's dream--

j.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Months Ago

Glad I could take you to that place, Jacob! Thanks so much for this review. Lydi**

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