until our forever

until our forever

A Poem by Lydia
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a repost from way back for Valentine's Day....because words do not expire

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artwork by daniela man



you pull me back towards myself
with your special brand of gravity
you surround me with your loving logic
then pour me into your arms
just one more time
one for the road as it were
a steady slow rain of emotion falls
desire blossoms 
in this half dream - half reality moment

mon amour
perhaps it has all been said before
but i must tell you once more
with feeling
when the sun embraces the sea 
when the moon kisses the stars
               until our forever
i love you

© 2019 Lydia



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can't say I'm a big fan of V-Day, mainly I guess cause what you are writing so poetically, and so very "nicely" I might add, should be the 'half dream-half reality' continuously, by the day, by the hour, every nanosecond now and forever, but there is a reason they also say, "never got to bed angry".....

I did have this once though, but it was very long ago when the sea ate the sun and stars shown in her eyes and the moon lit up her face... our forever lasts now only in my dreams... but Lydi, your repost has reminded me of those days and that time and the way that dreams remain and keep your heart beating... your poetry always reminds me just how "nice" love can be...

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Lydia

1 Month Ago

It's not just in dreams and fantasies....it can be this way. Thing is, it changes with time....gets.. read more



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Ah, Lydi, that attraction...like a body orbiting a planet, unable to break the pull of gravity...not, if we are lucky enough, that we would want to leave. Good fortune brings us there...hard work keeps us there.
The old saying...Love means never having to say you're sorry...was a Hollywood fabrication. Perhaps it should have read...Love does not exist in a vacuum...two must work with one idea in mind...to keep love alive and accept the changes.

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Lydia

1 Week Ago

How right you are, Ted! thank you very much for your review. Lydi**
" ... perhaps it has all been said before / but i must tell you once more". That's poetry in a nutshell. Doesn't matter if it has been said before, we are driven to say it again ... in OUR way. Nice write. ~Jim

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Lydia

2 Weeks Ago

Always happy to see a review from you, Jim. Thanks so much. Lydi**
Who said logic and poetry couldn't come to a truce. It's a very gentle and romantic read. Thanks for sharing ♡

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Lydia

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks for the review, Moon. Lydi**
a real treatise on the elegance of poetic verse. You dazzle me Lydia!

regards,
al

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Lydia

3 Weeks Ago

Fluffing my hair here! :) thank you so much, Al. Lydi**
A poem loaded with love and hope.. so glad I read it.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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Lydia

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much. Lydi**
well done Lydia ... words truly do live on ... L 1-4 for me are absolutely brilliant ... so incredibly full ... blessed and blooming ... and i think your "one for the road" and " ...all been said before" ... is brand new the way you use it ... what a treat Lydia ... and the artwork is perfect .. i took a bit of time to look at it and there is a swirling of activity with the beads, the hair thingy and the flowers but if i take time the focus is on her face after all ... much like your poem pulls .. is influenced by gravity .. and pours ... so glad i did not miss this one .. thanks for sharing!
E.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


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Lydia

3 Weeks Ago

You are a sweetheart, E. Thank you for the review of the poem and the artwork! I do take time to f.. read more
You are so write Lydi** words do not have a best by date.. and these ones in particular would be good any day of the year... Happy Valentine's Day my friend... :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Lydia

1 Month Ago

Happy V Day to you, Neville....may it be a very special one for you. Thanks for the review. Lydi**
Neville Pettitt

1 Month Ago

my pleasure as always is...
I don't think anyone writes a love poem quite like you Lydi. Especially on this auspicious day.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Lydia

1 Month Ago

Thanks so much, Ken. Happy Valentine's Day to you!
this reminds me that we should tell the ones who mean so much to us how we feel about them more often. thank you for putting it out there in all of it's heartfelt glory ... :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Lydia

1 Month Ago

Yes, we absolutely should, Pete. Thank you for the review. Lydi**
This is so so beautiful, you are so youthful at heart.

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Lydia

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much, Cassie. Even if the body is not willing, the heart and soul are! :) Lydi**

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