Mind of a madman (redone)

I think of myself as ex-sane
There are no morals in my brain
Don't look for my humanity
You will merely find my insanity

The rage is out of the cage
I'm getting ready to engage
Best get yourself prepared
To know what it is to be scared

You see my friend
I know your too soon end
You will be my first homicide.
But made to look like a suicide

You failed the test
I'm not impressed
I'll break the ribs in your chest

You thought I was so peaceful
Anger spreads like a cancer that's lethal
Erupts like a fire to diesel
My temper should be illegal

The beast in me is sleeping, he's not dead
He is the bringer of the dread.
He will arise from his slumber
And will become the hunter

Down upon you my destruction will rain
Expect the highest strain of pain
My entire fury will be deployed
Leaving you completely destroyed

I can see the falseness behind your eyes
You jeopardised your life with your lies
I'd advice for you to say your goodbyes
There is no God above in the skies
He would have to be real first to hear your cries

From my depths will emerge the horror
I'm getting ready for the slaughter
You are heading to become a goner
Come hell or high water

My plans will come into effect at night
Just you and me under the moonlight
There is no way you will survive
The beast in me has come to life

I'll rip your soul out of your body
Left all alone all dead and bloody
The madman inside finds it funny
Because you were so unlucky

Forever alone your corpse will remain
Your burial will be in no way humane
Down you'll sink in a watery terrain

Food for the bugs and fishes
They carry out my darkest wishes
Even the most malicious
Reducing your body to a state of decomposition

There is no one that is equal
I am on a completely different level
Under my mask resides the devil

Reviews

[Cœur]

This is very long, which is good. I'm always looking for longer poems. The rhyming is excellent, though I do feel that it's overdone and forced a bit. It's sometimes difficult to keep the reader's attention through longer pieces, but you kept mine very nicely. I enjoyed this, good work.

[Lykos]

I edited this one, my last one was really overdone. I appreciate your opinion. Thanks for the review