My beauty

My beauty

A Poem by Lykos
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Someone you never forget

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I can still remember first seeing those eyes
To me you glowed like a million fireflies
You were the definition of elegance and grace
Your presence always put a smile on my face

You used to say I gave you butterflies
Seeing you smile was the greatest prize
I could never get over your stunning beauty
And to always tell you was my biggest duty

But i could never have guessed what was coming
A sudden blow that would be crushing
Still beautiful as your eyes remained forever closed
But now when touched forever cold.

I still cry out your name in my sleep
A piece of you in my heart I shall always keep
Our memories shared forever mine
And in my heart an unseen shrine

© 2018 Lykos



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This is so utterly lovely, longing.. a very sweet and sincere tribute of an adored one from the heart. I enjoyed reading the urgings of your heart in this as you speak from a place of passion that rings synonymously with mine. So lovely!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Lykos

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much, glad you liked it. Appreciate your review!
It’s just so lovely the rhythm and rhyme are perfect and the topic is interesting and captivating overall it’s a great poem

Posted 5 Months Ago


Lykos

5 Months Ago

Thank you , appreciate your review!
Wow this was lovely. I love the line about her eyes still beimg beautiful when closed and the ending line about the unseen shrine were great! I almost feel like making it rhyme held it back, like you have so much you can express if you were more free to do so

Posted 5 Months Ago


Lykos

5 Months Ago

Maybe so, but the joy I get from making it rhyme, is the reason I write poems. But thanks for the ad.. read more
Sarah Wilson

5 Months Ago

well that's the most important part, that you enjoy it. great job!
Lykos

5 Months Ago

Exactly. Thanks
Beautiful and true love shared by only few- what a wonderful memory you hold- wow- love and beauty unreplacable and pure- wonderful depth here- full of emotion and feeling🌹

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lykos

6 Months Ago

True love rarely comes knocking twice. It's is a gift to have it, even if only for a short while. Th.. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

Yes and when it comes we cannot be sleeping- my pleasure🌹
Lykos

6 Months Ago

Indeed we can't
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mou
suddenly it turns into a poignant poem..your words are very beautiful which embrace it with feelings, the most valuable essence of poetry..just love it
mou...

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lykos

6 Months Ago

Thank you very much, glad you liked it
mou

6 Months Ago

my pleasure entirely :)
Really beautiful , I loved this.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lykos

6 Months Ago

Thanks you, appreciate the review!
This poem is just perfect.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lykos

4 Months Ago

Thank you, appreciate your review
Beautiful, just beautiful. Though it flowed just fine, there were some forced areas, but for the most part the rhymes were near perfect. Your words are almost heartbreaking, but so beautiful at the same time. There really isn't another word for it.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Lykos

9 Months Ago

Thank you coeur for your honest review. Appreciate it.
Cœur

9 Months Ago

My pleasure.

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Limerick city , Munster , Ireland



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