Done and dusted

Sometimes you put up with a so called friend, you should have left years ago.

Ready or not here comes the spark,
Frightening as a big dogs bark.
You better be ready for the hits,
After this I'm gonna call it quits.

Think I would remain your friend,
Go to hell mate this is the end.
Don't even try to deny with lies,
I'm only sorry that now I realise.

Think that your life is really great,
It looks like one massive mistake.
Go ahead and try to hide the fact,
You'll see that my truth was exact.

You're actually never going to be mature,
Sure look you never got the brochure.
I'm so glad of you im finally free,
You are worthless i now can see.

In your s****y life you're forever stuck,
You really have run out of luck.
With this rhyme I ring the bell,
And say f**k you and farewell.

Reviews

[C. Lee Battaglia]

I struggle with Anxiety and depression. It sucks sometimes but the cure that I've found is to write! It's the most joyful thing that I do. Just write! It will take away those pains and hardships. I would also like to say that you have real potential in your writing and I am Genuinely surprised how amazing your writing style is! It was fantastic and I just wanted to let you know that you could even one day be a published author/writer if you wanted to! Keep smiling, keep writing, and most importantly. be you! You have a talent and this is a talent that all people should see and read!
I have a story here about my best friend called "The Blonde Girl", you don't have to read it if you don't want to, but I felt like I should share it with you. :)

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/chasebattaglia/1445363/

[Lykos]

I feel the same, writing takes me to a different plane, like being transported to a deserted island, one where I can let rip all the emotions in my soul. That's what I feel like when I put pen to paper. Makes me feel free. Thanks for your review, really appreciate it. Once I have some free time, il give it a read and leave my review, no problem.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

For sure! I love the analogy! IT IS SO TRUE!
You are most welcome! And thank you!!!

[EJ's Horror]

A break up should always be seen as a new beginning :)

[Lykos]

Yes I believe it is too. I was just venting with this poem.