Four Walls

Four Walls

A Poem by Aurora

I am inside
A beautiful dream
With no walls
No borders
No barriers

Just you
Just me
My breath
Assimilating
Yours

I engulf
You
In
My
Vibrations

I am
Your
Voice'
Echo

As we
Resonate
In this
Clean,
White,
Sterilized
Ward

Between
These
Four
Walls

Just you
Just me.

© 2019 Aurora


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I love this my friend! first it was like the awaking and the freedom one reach inside themselves, then You turned it into another thing too, how two lovers can bond in all the levels and deepest ways so these four walls that hold them together in one room become un-existed.

Posted 2 Days Ago


When i read this the first time I felt like you were talking to yourself in a cell floating above yourself as a witness to your entity suffering trying to sooth say to your self in an embrace. I came back to it again and it seems now to also be a precursor to your broken mirror poem.

Posted 2 Days Ago


Aurora

2 Days Ago

Both are apt interpretations. Though the first is a more intended interpretation, the latter may or .. read more
If walls could talk. What secrets could be told. I liked the personal feel of the poetry. When two feel safe and sound in the safety of four walls. A wonderful place to know. Thank you Aurora for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Days Ago


Aurora

3 Days Ago

Thanks for summarizing the endless possibilities. I was thinking of someone else while writing this... read more
even when we think we are floating free, we have those inhibitions, that which keeps us from feeling totally free...we make our own walls, our own limitations.
nicely composed with the short, abbreviated lines that add to the rhythm of this piece.
j.

Posted 4 Days Ago


Aurora

4 Days Ago

We certainly do. Thanks Cilberto.
Few have the talent to say few words and pack them with so much meaning. This is a great poem. Well done.

Posted 4 Days Ago


Aurora

4 Days Ago

Thanks Bryanel. This was written for someone who is battling a lot in a psyche ward, as we speak. Sa.. read more
Bryanel The Risen

4 Days Ago

I say a prayer for everyone. One time, in the not so distant past, they requested I visit a young wo.. read more
Aurora

4 Days Ago

It makes most sense to me. Everyone else is immaterial. At least in the context of this conversation.. read more

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