Dance your way into me

Dance your way into me

A Poem by Lyrical Love
"

There is a naked form that must be exposed and then covered by a truth in knowing real love.

"

 

I’ll meet you away…far, far away… in the dark
Over there by that flowering tree …in the park
The one that smells… so sweetly
You say you want me,
and to be into… me
Look into my eyes and feel~
What my soul sings
Without touching me
My lyrics
will calm your spirit
 as I prepare you
 for this journey…to see
how to… dance your way into me
know that what I say is truth
your fears, tears,
weaknesses and inhibitions
must falter…for this experience with me
I need you to be perfect… in your mind
Perfect in your heart…and pure
Deep in your soul
So that you may endure
What’s ahead…as I start to run
Follow me,
 at my pace
Know my love,
…this is not a race
I am able to keep up with the wind~
…Dancing a gallop for all to see
 believe in yourself
when you see my strength… that you have to be
what I look at, when it is you… I see
My rhythm is starting
I feel myself moving…running, jumping, and leaping
I can soar with HIS wind blowing under
My wings~
…I feel you far in the rear
Heart pounding, preparing to leave your space
That is a dark hole without light, nor vigor
Feeling my words…
Your soul is trying to learn a new tune
Filling your spirit with fresh air
…Eyes closed for the new moon
HE kisses your forehead
You feel yourself becoming anew…and energized
As you start to run
 As a warrior would…your heart beat now
sounds like a tribal drum
knowing you listened , and accepted truth
your refuse starts to fall off being lost
in the trees
I run faster to leap over the lake,
Enjoying the cool night air
To start up the mountain
…My soul is prepared
For the light… that soon we will share
As I slow to become conscious
My run is changing to frolic
the tune my heart now beats is a calling of… lyrical love
knowing that you will soon
beam with a new radiance
that comes from being unbound…
knowing that light makes you
limitless, and free…
You are now ready to hold my hand
…Up on the mountain
Under the moon, and in the light

As you dance into me. Copyright © 2008 by Lyrical Love   


© 2008 Lyrical Love



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this poem is about someone excepting god, there basically is one person trying to get a lost soul to run with them into the light of god and once that person gets there they can be free. the both of them in the same light. with perfect souls and a common balance with a higher power. but the thing is that not all sheep were made to go into the light, some of them where meant to be left a stray.

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"Heart pounding, preparing to leave your space
That is a dark hole without light, nor vigor
Feeling my words
Your soul is trying to learn a new tune
Filling your spirit with fresh air..."

Does not get any better....love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I came back and read it again it's addictive... a sensually seductive poem that is one of my favorites!
your words:
""My rhythm is startingI feel myself movingrunning, jumping, and leapingI can soar with HIS wind blowing underMy wings~I feel you far in the rearHeart pounding, preparing to leave your spaceThat is a dark hole without light, nor vigorFeeling my wordsYour soul is trying to learn a new tuneFilling your spirit with fresh air""
This is sensational, my talented friend...

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I disagree with Dionysus's last line in his comment to you. None of us in this world are meant to be left astray. Up to that point I too felt this was of a spiratual nature and still do. I am sorry that I have not been able to visit. It seems the hours get fewer to find my way here. I will be back but can't promise when. LOL Maybe you can nickname me your phantom Reviewer. Just will never know when I will show up. Hate it that it is just that way right now. Until we meet again, stay safe and keep following the light.

Blessings,
Lesa

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

"as you dance into me"!

This is "Beautiful"!
Very good write

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I'll meet you awayfar, far away in the dark
Over there by that flowering tree in the park
My lyrics
will calm your spirit
as I prepare you
for this journeyto see
how to dance your way into me
know that what I say is truth
your fears, tears,
weaknesses and inhibitions
must falterfor this experience with me
I need you to be perfect in your mind
Perfect in your heartand pure
Deep in your soul
My rhythm is starting
I feel myself movingrunning, jumping, and leaping
I can soar with HIS wind blowing under
My wings~
I feel you far in the rear
Heart pounding, preparing to leave your space
That is a dark hole without light, nor vigor
Feeling my words
Your soul is trying to learn a new tune
Eyes closed for the new moon
HE kisses your forehead
You feel yourself becoming anewand energized
My God this is really wonderful,from start to the end ,very nice story you tell here
in wonderful words ..wonderful tunes..its like a melody,i read at least three times
and i could read much more,this is really wonderful..as i see it its a call to see Him..Believe in him ..
then he will see the light shed all worries,become so free ..
wonderful write

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

"Dance your way into me" how beautiful and metaphorical. This is one of my favorite poems of yours yet, although I love them all. I think it's great how you interweaved your name, your representation into the poem itself. It makes you stand out very uniquely. I also loved how you used the word "soul" many times in your poems. This is one of my favorite nouns in a poem too, and I use it a lot.

The .....the breaks in the poem, keep it very smooth, i feel it is so effortless for me to read through it, and it was an enjoyable read for sure.

Kena

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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nice write for those seeking god.
Jan/uisiom

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem hit me in just the right part of my brain and gave me the best feeling! I admire your writing, your rhyming and the true beauty you speak of here. Very lovely and touching!

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The language is lovely here...

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Salvation shines in this amazing poem.


your fears, tears,
weaknesses and inhibitions
must falterfor this experience with me
I need you to be perfect in your mind
Perfect in your heartand pure
Deep in your soul
So that you may endure
What's aheadas I start to run
Follow me,



Dance into the Light of Salvation and Eternal Life


You are now ready to hold my hand
Up on the mountainUnder the moon, and in the light
As you dance into me


Very well done.


Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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