Dance your way into me

Dance your way into me

A Poem by Lyrical Love
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There is a naked form that must be exposed and then covered by a truth in knowing real love.

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I’ll meet you away…far, far away… in the dark
Over there by that flowering tree …in the park
The one that smells… so sweetly
You say you want me,
and to be into… me
Look into my eyes and feel~
What my soul sings
Without touching me
My lyrics
will calm your spirit
 as I prepare you
 for this journey…to see
how to… dance your way into me
know that what I say is truth
your fears, tears,
weaknesses and inhibitions
must falter…for this experience with me
I need you to be perfect… in your mind
Perfect in your heart…and pure
Deep in your soul
So that you may endure
What’s ahead…as I start to run
Follow me,
 at my pace
Know my love,
…this is not a race
I am able to keep up with the wind~
…Dancing a gallop for all to see
 believe in yourself
when you see my strength… that you have to be
what I look at, when it is you… I see
My rhythm is starting
I feel myself moving…running, jumping, and leaping
I can soar with HIS wind blowing under
My wings~
…I feel you far in the rear
Heart pounding, preparing to leave your space
That is a dark hole without light, nor vigor
Feeling my words…
Your soul is trying to learn a new tune
Filling your spirit with fresh air
…Eyes closed for the new moon
HE kisses your forehead
You feel yourself becoming anew…and energized
As you start to run
 As a warrior would…your heart beat now
sounds like a tribal drum
knowing you listened , and accepted truth
your refuse starts to fall off being lost
in the trees
I run faster to leap over the lake,
Enjoying the cool night air
To start up the mountain
…My soul is prepared
For the light… that soon we will share
As I slow to become conscious
My run is changing to frolic
the tune my heart now beats is a calling of… lyrical love
knowing that you will soon
beam with a new radiance
that comes from being unbound…
knowing that light makes you
limitless, and free…
You are now ready to hold my hand
…Up on the mountain
Under the moon, and in the light

As you dance into me. Copyright © 2008 by Lyrical Love   


© 2008 Lyrical Love



WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.

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this poem is about someone excepting god, there basically is one person trying to get a lost soul to run with them into the light of god and once that person gets there they can be free. the both of them in the same light. with perfect souls and a common balance with a higher power. but the thing is that not all sheep were made to go into the light, some of them where meant to be left a stray.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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"What my soul sings
Without touching me
My lyrics will calm your spirit"

These are very moving words here, this write is amazing it's really beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This speaks volumns, a passionate heart willing to take their love into another essence, showing them the way to be complete with themselves first, before they can truely know the love that you will give them in return, knowing that our creator and sacrifice is the only path to true love. I am amazed at your insight, these are beautiful sentiments expressed.
Antony

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This is really beautiful. It's got a dreamlike or fantasy-like feel to it. And not an erotic fantasy exactly...I agree with whoever said this was a spiritual romantic piece. Very pretty, very soothing in a way...I just enjoyed it. Awesome!

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

You are now ready to hold my hand
Up on the mountain
Under the moon, and in the light
As you dance into me

This reminds me of the movie *Shall we dance* when he comes to fetch her at her work, with the rose.
It is so heartfelt, I like the way you put certain words apart from others.

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

You are just a master at the deep feelings and expressing them

Look into my eyes and feel~
What my soul sings
Without touching me
My lyrics


what stunning lines as it is so true that the more you know the person deep down the more wonderful the love making is... you have me so captured by your captivating writings.

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Anyone can write suggestively about romantic encounters. This is so much deeper. Such a spiritual existence. Such a stunning relationship. Wonderful write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


This poem gives Spirit wings to the age-old romantic chase.

I like the inverse strip tease, the soul getting naked, before the body gets naked, love ritualizing desire thusly.

Besides the spontaneous testing of desire's fitness for Spirit love, there's an interesting subtext for me: religious semantics' fitness for Spiritual poetics. Spirit's wings keep your "He" yet above dichotomous reproach, though a gender paradox in the greater Kosmic Conscious scheme of things.

In the end, a la William Blake: "Energy is pure delight."

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

"My run is changing to frolic the tune my heart now beats is a calling of lyrical love
knowing that you will soon beam with a new radiance
that comes from being unboundknowing that light makes you limitless, and free"

just beautiful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

very well written ... with yr unique metaphors of expression ..

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I liked this piece but it's not my favorite of yours. It started off very similar to my favorite poem of yours MEET ME FOR POETRY BY THE ELM http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/LyricalLove831/306515/ but then it goes a completely different direction. It didn't hit me as deeply as the elm poem. However, you have a good talent at intimacy.

I'll keep reading your work, I'm sure there's a new favorite in there.

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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