~Drips from May to September~

~Drips from May to September~

A Poem by Lyrical Love
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This is a coming together of the words that float in rivers of two minds. Lyrical Love (bolded), & Master Marvin Lewis Jr. Enjoy!

"

 

~Drips from May to September
 
Painting a dreamscape while sitting at the ocean's lips,
only within an empty notebook does this clouded mind rest
A break in the sky to finally see the light
that once shadowed my spirit, is now Leading me to my quest
Leaving behind every dark moment and its hurt, to be healed
right now,  
walking devoid of regrets,
for it is tears that beautify a smile
Warmth from the words of fire strike from your heart
ignite strength in my soul for you to calm
Inside the realms I visit, once my ears taste your beauty,
It is there I comprehend that you were fashioned by the bare hands of God
I am wet with sounds sent, to me as you
liquefy my spirit
cleanse
my every being...
then, there I will receive you
and drink...    
while gazing upon the fragrances your imagination daydreams
the manner in which your mind blossoms
 has made me afraid to blink
the quickness you feel, that will arrive
 will be your new sense to enjoy for a while
the presence of my sumptuous satire
will drip
onto your lips
 forever…
over, and over again… you’ll thirst no more
for that vibrant hue
as you paint my image in your mind
of tranquility while being stilled
as I am guiding your hands
Somewhere above our firmament or beside a cherubim
I do not see limits but if they're here, I am happy to be trapped,
I've never felt this so it must be a reverie
for my ears have felt surfaces unknown to hands.
I am almost too weak to stand
my eyes comprehend this realm by the mouthfuls  
giving my intellect indigestion,
leaving my heart searching for the proper timing,
In a sentimental mood,
I hope this song never ends.  
            
 
  
                      
 
 
 

© 2008 Lyrical Love


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Marvin, I now know and trust what I 'feel' even more because of you. I could feel your strength, perspicasity, and confidence under an umbrella of humility by reading your work. The power that you hold-beams around you and your words, leading me to a personal sanctuary of peace. Thank you for your personal time, and thoughts.
The pleasure has been all mine in seeing a masterful protege' of the highest power create, and relate with me. I pray that you stay in the middle of the road (on the right path). The world will be different, refreshed and new after they meet the power of 'you'.
~Warmly, Lyrical


Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Great job! I love the part where it says "I do not see limits but if they're here, I'm happy to be trapped." There is such a smooth feeling in this! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


"I do not see limits but if they're here, I am happy to be trapped"

That's the line that jerked my heart. I'm happy you have all this beauty to express. Much love.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this dialog that entwines together so beautifully. If only people could communicate at this level all the time. Thank you for sharing. Donni

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerfully moving and lyrical, and so well developed, flowing like one beautiful stream... Uplifting, soft, tender, and full of vibrant visual images that capture the feel and imagination of life and love...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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i am still ingesting...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mentally stimulating (applause)
I couldnt stop reading and wanted more once I was finished! Continued climbing with your every word But heres where I paused/peaked...

'Somewhere above our firmament or beside a cherubim I do not see limits but if they're here, I am happy to be trapped'

Powerful! You know what? Ima reread it and get high again!


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this piece flowed flawlessly. I was capitivated from the beginning to the end.

Three snaps from me!

Vanessa

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this..it is like a song with no end, you are just beautiful my friend! x0x0

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This melding of two hearts left me speachless. I love the way both of you write. And to be able to enjoy two of my favotire writers on this site in one piece was absolutely fantastic. The flow was flawless. This is truly a work of art. I hope that this is only the first in a collection of collaborations.

JS

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:)) This was very smooth and subtly expressive. Nice

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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