good night...Moon!

good night...Moon!

A Poem by Lyrical Love
"

When our spirits connect... it doesn't matter where you are, I can feel you.

"
Many facets of your love I see

when gazing into the eyes of your Soul

Like the changes in the Moon at night... You forever, light my way.

The newness you bring to awaken my Being

Into whom I was created to be.

Giving my breast the fullness of a new Moon

tonight~

encouraging Me again to take flight.

When I look at you from here         

with my heart                                   

you cause a gust of wind to increase the ascent of my journey

clearing                             

my view for the light of the Moon.

When thoughts of you enter into view

Clouds creep in

Wanting to steal my smiles of you

I open my window to inhale your sweet breath

Letting me know that you are with me

…feeling that you are near

I lose all loneliness and fear

I pray, and exhale

Curling up like a kitten

Feeling. and Being...

I gaze up out into the darkness of my opened window

with each soft chill that caresses

my face…

I say to you

~Good night, moon.

 


© 2008 Lyrical Love



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This is rich with passion and it drips imagery, each line was so tangible my mind was literally able to walk within the muse. It shows just how truly brilliant you are simply because while reading I was able to imagine temperature, time, fragrances, sounds, lighting and even the atmosphere of this beautiful moment you described.
I like the progressions and structure, your dedication is evident in all of your work because It always feels so polished, calm and assured. I love the manner by which you write of different subjects, in that I never sense hesitation and its that type of confidence and transparency that has elevated the greatest of writers.
Its your virtue and the pure unabashed emotions and verbal sketches you manufacture that have made you unforgettable. These are just a few of the countless reasons I'm a fan, I feel privileged whenever my mind ingests another side of yours... Thank you! :)

Beautiful write!




Posted 9 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Oh how beautiful. A wonderful remake of the childrens story

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Lyrical Love strikes again! Of course, this one's more dreamier than the other stuff you've sent to me.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i have always found a mysterious power in the moon's gaze and to use it as a metaphor for two souls as one is astounding and brilliant...

Like the changes in the Moon at night... You forever, light my way.

I just love that line, but the whole thing is deeply rich in sensuality and deep love.

Amazing work. I knew I was waiting for something special when I came to your page earlier and you did not disappoint.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's full of emotion, passion. its speaks a lot about achieving the need of love and belonginess wherein one can feel the utmost security.

the methaphorical view of the moon is carried gently.

nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the changes as well. It is even deeper and creative.

Its no wonder Lyrical Love fits you so well.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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