Sunday Morning

Sunday Morning

A Poem by Lyrical Love

You stared

me awake

with your desire to touch and taste

my sweetness.

Shaken by a mental moan from with-In

a deep rest

and loving state

of mind

as I lay. You stared me

awake            

with your strong will

not

to touch and to feel

my skin as it peeked

through the sheets. You stared

me awake. To turn

and look into your

eyes and see

a want

for a place to crawl inside

and hide. You stared

me awake and now

we can both feel,

and be filled

with

each other’s mental

moans.

 

 


© 2008 Lyrical Love



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Nothing amazes me more than hearing or in this case reading a woman's thoughts.
Nice choice of words and the progression was alluring.

Being that you are a virtuous woman no matter what ideas your mind conjures they will always be interpreted for what they are... Beautiful, pure, insightful, edifying and pleasant once received.
This poem shows the difference between a virtuous woman and a woman without virtue.
In that you were able to depict something seductive with vivid imagery and it couldn't be looked at as raunchy because virtue allowed it to be elegantly written and still arousing.

Another excellent write!


Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Lush, titillating, and penetrating. Excellent work as usual; this one strikes me as a bit more serious and intense than your other poems. I liked its perspective.

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

It is sensual but that is not everything. It really soft like a drop of dew and yet the feelings are marked vividly.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sexy and stripped down and super effective strong writing;) I digggg. identifiable words and ways of putting them, lyrical but never so to overstate the truth that each of us can easily identify with. neat!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very strong. A bond like that, a relationship like you have described is an amazing thing. There's not a word out of place.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Nothing amazes me more than hearing or in this case reading a woman's thoughts.
Nice choice of words and the progression was alluring.

Being that you are a virtuous woman no matter what ideas your mind conjures they will always be interpreted for what they are... Beautiful, pure, insightful, edifying and pleasant once received.
This poem shows the difference between a virtuous woman and a woman without virtue.
In that you were able to depict something seductive with vivid imagery and it couldn't be looked at as raunchy because virtue allowed it to be elegantly written and still arousing.

Another excellent write!


Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This is sexual, but classy at the same time. I sense the longing in the lines, which is what really makes this piece stand out to me. Great word choice...the flow seems slightly choppy in places, but overall, this was nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

all i can say is... very sensual and sexy! woohooo!!! loved it! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice job. can even be a spoken word.i liked your font, very modern. overall, love this poem. man, i miss those sunday mornings waking up to a man. oh well, now i wake up to my stuffed animals. hee hee.

kena

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very strong use of words, the poem is settled yet, erotic. it almost gives me the feel is if it is raining outside, i dont know why , i guess because it is so smooth.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nothing like too tired souls to find one another and breathing life into one another... simply beautiful!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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