questions in his mind

questions in his mind

A Poem by Lyrical Love

 
 
I lay here thinking of your questions, and thoughts
how could You not know of what...
would it be like
for me looking at flowers on the streets of New York
at the one of many open store fronts
crowded in enjoyment
sipping my favorite morning java
being carried away in steamy thoughts of you
Waiting, my love for you to find me
openly...
Destined for promise
you Walking with the crowd
but the nearing
of my presence slows your pace
questioning... the energy that turns and moves you with a
feeling-seen in your eyes, knowing that you will soon see my face
only being lead by a dream that holds my spirit
you are lead off course to touch
Running toward the unknown, but welcoming warmth
...solace,
that confuses your mind
like a gust of wind from out of nowhere
she has to be here
you have daydreamed the fragrance from my neck
after gently pushing my hair aside
Yes, you smell me in my mind
intensity of happenstance
lets you know
It's me
wearing that hat...almost not breathing anymore,
making everything a blur, you
run and put your arms
around my waist without ever seeing my face
and taste my neck with a kiss...I know it is you because
our hearts begin to beat rhythmically,
and like a great crescendo... start to pound like kettle drums
 
One second feels like a life time, with you.
Kissing, and crying with an ocean floor of anticipation.
Hugs meshing souls with all
 
questions...
finally answered.
 

© 2008 Lyrical Love



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Amazing!, Beautifully written and expressed in a manner of fine taste,
I should not say this here...lol
My favorite part of a woman is her neck...lol

you have daydreamed the fragrance from my neck
after gently pushing my hair aside
Yes, you smell me in my mind
intensity of happenstance
lets you know
It's me

This knocked me out of my chair.

Thank you for writing and sharing such a wonderful poem.

Art

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Loved the stle of this poem. Its got an urban, modern feel to it and I thought these lines were especially wonderful:

"Yes, you smell me in my mind intensity of happen stance lets you know It's me"

They speak volumes. Great poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


when I first read this all I could say was WOW! what a beautiful peice, Poetry in its finest form.
A great write

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved this. Very refreshing for the soul. A nice light n airey poem with a free spirited feel to it. The question answered....mmmmm ??? !!!
Thanks
Babsie Bee xxx

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I like your unique style of writing. Its a beautiful write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the lines "One second feels like a life time, with you.
Kissing, and crying with an ocean floor of anticipation."

Very romantic and I can see the passion in your writing.

Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"she has to be here
you have daydreamed the fragrance from my neck
after gently pushing my hair aside
Yes, you smell me in my mindintensity of happenstance
lets you know
It's me"

The hopeless romantic in me was glued to every line. Outstanding imagery!....I saw everthing unfolding in my minds eye. This piece was a true joy to read. Excellent write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Okay, I didn't breath for a minute. I feel like there are so many interpretations. I feel soul mates finding each other randonly. So beautiful and full of clear images. Love this one.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


One second feels like a life time, with you.
Kissing, and crying with an ocean floor of anticipation.
Hugs meshing souls with all

questions...
finally answered.


Love these lines...your words and your mind..This is passion and desire.. felt all over my body! Merci
Magical.. and Crystalline... Love it.. Muah 100 % Pure love.. awwwwwwwwwww


Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh my god. Woman. I wish I could write like you. I know that feeling. You captured it so well. And this line:

"you have daydreamed the fragrance from my neck"

My Gods help me. I felt it. And wanted to smell it. Does that make sense. You wild, mad woman poet!

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This piece is very beautiful. It has so much imagery and emotion in it. Its funny when you can relate to a piece and its like everything you want to say. So WOW!!!! is all I can say.
-Cathy

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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