Stilettos

Stilettos

A Poem by Lyrical Love

 

~~Stilettos ~~


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
I should have looked better,
deeper...and
with an enhanced vision...of you
getting my prize, that lays between my thighs
 
Letting you feel my energy,
and have my number...was the start of
my biggest blunder
 
Tasting your fruit,
and not recognizing the flavor...
was not a reason for me to think...to savor
 
Minute one, day two, and definitely not month
three was not enough knowledge, or truth
displayed for a Queen like me
 
I have looked at the best...of what I have that's tangible
like the fine crystal vase, my highest count threads...
but not before I opened my legs
 
I contemplated long and hard before spending
700.00 dollars for the shoes
known as Jimmy Choo's
 
I waited a year checking & trying for a better fit
...noting the quality, and waiting for a while
for that one pair with the right style
 
Asking many questions on-line,
trying to find, even one flaw...before covering
...my feet...
 
I spent more time & energy for shoes at places
...than I did for a man that would be right for my life
...not knowing he would bring me harm and strife
 
The next time I will recognize that exotic taste...of his fruit
when for sure... I am in search of a man
with my own plan
 
I will now see without those blinding rose colored glasses,
and not be amused by swagger, curls, and
muscles.
 
I will hide my prize up on a shelf...and not display
 God's given gifts,

and talent...

for a time.

 ~~  ~~
 
I will not let the ungodly feel my energy,
or come in my face, to invade my presence ...a real man of character
knows his place.
 
I'll check with the Master 1st,  for that man that thinks he knows...

the plan
...of him, being My~ godly man.

 


© 2009 Lyrical Love



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Okay enough said. I starting up a Lyrical Love fan club and I am the President. Wow you are amazing Lyrical. Now as a guy I can appreciate the way you acknowledge your mistake in picking the wrong guy and making sure the next guy understand that he better come correct because you will not be taken in again. This piece can be an anthem or use in a rap off if you facing this guy face to face. You thunder is with you and this poems says so. Great write but what else can one expect from you but that. Thanks for the creativity, honesty and my newly appointed position as your fan club President. Mercy!

Posted 8 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.




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Great choice of words, a beautiful write, a definite pleasure to read your poetry.

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Letting you feel my energy,
and have my number...was the start of
my biggest blunder
Tasting your fruit,
and not recognizing the flavor...
was not a reason for me to think...to savor
than I did for a man that would be right for my life
...not knowing he would bring me harm and strife
wonderful write.great choice of words
nice thoughts
wonderful work...

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Amen...I hear u all up and down this poem.
This reminds me of what my older sister always tells
me "baby sis hide ya uncut diamonds!' as emotionally attached
creations of God we must protect ourselves from love in order
to give ourselves fully to it one day. God alone knows what we trully
need and is more than willing to reveal that to us in his time. I love the
confessions and power in this piece the strength of a Godly woman is
shown in every verse... I applaud your work this is amazing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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