Look At These Words

Look At These Words

A Chapter by Ms. Starr
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my look on our art :D shorter than most. don't try to think about it.

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December 27th, 2009

Writing is an art, just as well as drawing or sculpting or the universe.
As the letters/words/sentences/secrets leak from your soul-mind-arm-fingers to your pen-ink-paper-eyes you can feel the fantasies/reality of your mind leaking swiftly/not fast enough onto oh-so-thin paper, precious jewels hidden in the coarse skins of rough words, stowed away in the covered treasure chests/sentences.
Such glistening beauty to the one smart/alone/real enough to see it.
We spit the words onto the page, dripping with the poisonous venom we’ve triggered to ease from our elongated fangs.
We allow them to roll from our tongues like honey from a knife, so sweet, sickly sweet, servingservingserving till you’re gagging.
Music for the deaf, note/word/beautiful/note over and over and tears fall and repeat in new formation.
And that is how we live.
And that is how we breath/see/hear/scream/speak/beg and that is how we live/bleed/live/die/live/write.






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Author's Note

Ms. Starr
again, ignore grammar. it's all about emotion. read it how you do, i feel it as face-paced, everywhere, and powerful xP

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I didn't see any grammar problems, it was wonderful how it was! xD
It was powerful and it was emotional, very good writing indeed.
Wish I had more to say about the piece, but anything I come up with seems to lack. By the way, I loved the picture [:
~N~

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