advance says

it will my word when she will comeback

from many days
i am waiting
waiting for you
you promised me
promised me to come
but when you come
it's too late
for the emotion
and time is no more.

Author's Note

yeah, it will be.....

Reviews

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

Hmm.. I can infer what you mean in this poem but I'm not sure if it's all too clear. You can work on that.

But overall it's nice

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime heart will give up and close the door to a old love. Nice flow of thoughts and I like the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

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Very introspective.

[gombeggar]

anxious and impatient

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

OK, this is better than the others. Makes more sense. I do have a question about, "but when you come" ... is there a problem with the 'tense' (past versus present) or did you mean for it to have a colloquial/sexual representation? I can't determine that; if that's even in the ball park of what you meant to convey. But, the best so far (I'm reading them in order).

[de_maruf]

no,
there is no sexual representation here