what?

what?

A Poem by de_maruf
"

??????

"
when you read this you think what it is?
is it a poem or writing of a kid?
some one get confused
some one hesitate to review
though it is neither a poem nor a good writing
some one should leave here a comment
but what and why?


© 2012 de_maruf



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de_maruf
what?

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In whimsy I write: It is what I read, both poem and the writing of a kid. Perhaps confused but knowing that some will review because it is baited with red-stained hooks floating upward; with some hesitation and because they're unsure of what they are. "Are we poem or good writing or perhaps neither and why should anyone leave a comment or review when to replay my words would not be new... just literary goo." Adieu! :o)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I enjoyed this read, nicely written

Posted 4 Years Ago


I enjoyed reading this. It actually made me smile in these tough times. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


de_maruf

4 Years Ago

thanks
lol

Posted 4 Years Ago


I will leave a comment, because this is rather interesting.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Pax
a puzzling write!
i wonder why as well...
i say its clever!

Posted 4 Years Ago


what: i understand why you wrote this

why: because in times like this when the world is so crazy we all need a lil boost to cheer us up

Posted 4 Years Ago


de_maruf

4 Years Ago

may be
ha ha
so many people read without commenting. i chalk it up to two things. they are either lazy or they are visiting non members...it's okay, your friends will review your work, there is a third possibility however, they may be over burdened with read requests and are just skimming your titles to get you off the list..... nice effort!

Posted 4 Years Ago


de_maruf

4 Years Ago

i am just shaking my head
hmm
quinfinn

4 Years Ago

it happens
What??? Why???

Clever, except there are 62 views and only 7 reviews...a great many some one said screw it...no comment today ;-)

-kimmer

Posted 4 Years Ago


de_maruf

4 Years Ago

hmm
A clever, original poem - I like the direct address to the reader/reviewer. This reviewer says - a good work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


de_maruf

4 Years Ago

ha ha
In whimsy I write: It is what I read, both poem and the writing of a kid. Perhaps confused but knowing that some will review because it is baited with red-stained hooks floating upward; with some hesitation and because they're unsure of what they are. "Are we poem or good writing or perhaps neither and why should anyone leave a comment or review when to replay my words would not be new... just literary goo." Adieu! :o)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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dhaka, south, Bangladesh



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