last letter

last letter

A Poem by de_maruf
"

for nearest one

"

feeling irritating,
because all faces are glomy
culprit is i
so i have to leave 


i can't express but 
jimmy was my nearest 
her leaving 
force me to leave


after four month
when i came back
i can't but went her room
to get back my memoirs 


i decide to meet her 
when i feeling her absence 
i found a open letter there
which was written a month ago for me


i tried to communicate with her to meet
but a shock hold me back of her death 
i was thundered 
just thundered 


i opened her letter 
and found to tear
" my heart want to see you with great eager" 
nothing else...........


© 2012 de_maruf



Author's Note

de_maruf
it's my emotion

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sad piece but very well written

Posted 4 Years Ago


de_maruf

4 Years Ago

thanks
this is such a lovely composed piece, so sad, and lost..

Posted 4 Years Ago


de_maruf

4 Years Ago

pleased
marie

4 Years Ago

:)
de_maruf

4 Years Ago

:)
I actually really liked this poem, so all I really have to say is keep at it :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


the wording choice might seem strange, ie feeling irritating instead of irritated, i think in this case it actually works. i wouldn't change it here, because it comes across as emotional, and true emotion is very rarely perfect or formulaic. so, very beautiful effort.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I notice the wrong usage of tenses at the start but...

You never fail to interest this reader of yours~

Your message is incredibly clear and perhaps I've grown accustomed to this writing style of yours that's very unique and easy-to-read.

Personally, I like reading your poems for basic reasons: 1. It's easy to read 2. Your message is undeniably clear

So I applaud you, please continue with your work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


its a very powerful emotion. Very sad

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is a sad poem but with very strong emotions
-Penelope H.

Posted 4 Years Ago


de_maruf

4 Years Ago

thanks for read
An old friend returns with news.

Posted 4 Years Ago


de_maruf

4 Years Ago

not just that
Dayran

4 Years Ago

Of course!
nicely penned

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is really sad. :(

Posted 4 Years Ago



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de_maruf

dhaka, south, Bangladesh



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