Panther

Panther

A Poem by MNeilsen
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Each of us have many roles or views of ourselves

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Green eyes follow their prey
Sleek black fur crouched watching
My quarry sensing danger moves away
Whiskers twitch I prepare to spring
I am a Hunter
                       
Alert, my eyes scan the area
As I do every day
Searching for lurking danger
Guarding my family, they must be safe
I am a Protector                 
 
 Lean muscle and razor sharp teeth
My claws are the deadliest around
Fear will enter your heart if you see me
As we both know how quickly I can put you in the ground
I am a Panther
 
Night is falling and I hear my name
Leaving my post with a yawn and a stretch
I set off hoping to find my home ever the same
Over my dinner on this day I will reflect
I am Bagheera
 
A hand reaches down scratches behind my ear
Before she walks over to fill my dish
I follow passing the sisters who wish I were not here
It is her, my owner, that I protect and miss
I am her Midnight
 
Until tomorrow
When I will be a Panther once more

© 2009 MNeilsen


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This is wonderful
I really like your imagery as well.
Very well written write

Posted 14 Years Ago


i love the imagery in this piece very strong and it flows like lyrics ... overall a very impressive write....

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was so cute, and very relatable. My cat often thinks she's much more than she is, stalking people around the house like she's some fierce tiger, when really she doesn't even reach my knee. One thing: The rhymes in the second stanza aren't as strong as the rest. Loved it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Great poem. Very well written. You are a poet my friend. Get used to hearing that. I love the way this tells a story and the end has a little twist to it. Well, if I didn't know Midnight. But you know what I mean. Keep putting up poems please!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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