Tides of War

Look at the war you've begun

Waging battles all in the name of fun

Your ship sank long ago

Hope, love and faith all aboard

The wise tide washed your body ashore

Your lips breathed the words "I want more" 

Gather up your demons and rage

Speak of freedom from the view of your cage

Set sail again only to see

You're a prisoner of an unforgiving sea 

Reviews

[Yas]

Really well written, could imagine this being a book, would draw me in like this poem as.

[Christy the Poetic Hear..]

Very beautiful!!! Your rhymes flew well and the last line is gold.
Nice writing!!!!

[MF.Womack]

Thank you very much!

[Vicky]

Lovely poet took the words out of my...fingers? Very, very well done!