Ms Maggie

Ms Maggie

A Poem by la Abeja

Old Ms Maggie is a sweet-heart true

Cooking's been her delight since youth

But we can't bare to breathe

The greetings we receive

For her dishes are garlic infused

© 2010 la Abeja

Author's Note

la Abeja
This is my first attempt at a structured poem.

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Somehow I find this a little humorous. It sounds so much like a preschooler complaining about his teacher's weird cooking skills, or whatever. I think it's short and adorable.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Added on April 1, 2010
Last Updated on April 1, 2010


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