I Love You

I Love You

A Poem by la Abeja
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Based off the game you play with children

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I love you

 

            No, I love you

 

Yeah well,

I love you more

 

            No, I love you more

 

I love you more than

All the houses on our street

 

            Well I love you more than

            A day’s worth of heart beats

 

I love you more than

All the dust bunnies under the bed

 

            Well I love you more than

            All the hairs on your head

 

I love you more than

All the freckles on your face

 

            Well I love you more than

            All the flavors you can taste

 

I love you more than

All the leaves on every tree

 

            Well I love you more than

            All the molecules in the sea

 

Times infinity!

 

            Times infinity squared!

 

I love you

 

            But I love you more

 

 

©I LOVE YOU!©


© 2010 la Abeja



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:) This poem was so hilarious and sweet. I shared it with my mom and she enjoyed it more. Wonderful imagination. Please, make more like it. The sweet little rhyme made it almost like a nursery rhyme. Thanks for sharing. Please, keep writing. Gionelly*KiSS

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sweet

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very sweet =] I love the geekiness of it at the end lol ;-D Some of it didn't flow well and sounded more like prose than poetry.. and you use the word 'well' a bit excessively, but I really enjoyed this poem immensely =D Keep up the good work!!!!!!! This is now one of my favorite poems :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


I LOVE this... its really sweet and funny.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This just lifts the spirit and makes one smile! What a wonderful write, filled with the wonder and joy of infinite love!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on April 6, 2010
Last Updated on July 12, 2010
Tags: Love, Cute, Silly, Poetry

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