Cold fact

Cold fact

A Poem by MOON

The wind in the trees are rustling

 Kismet’s alchemy a magic wand

The sky meets the rising ocean

A waltz anticipating no end

 

For far too long no applause no roses and wine

You were the open secret seemingly lost in time

 

Destiny found you my darling

Karma played its  visible hand

Some songs are poetry in motion

Yours was one of those my friend

 


© 2013 MOON



Author's Note

MOON
Please copy this link and read this amazing story, listen to the music its pure poetry.
http://thequietus.com/articles/09726-rodriguez-searching-for-sugarman

Searching for Sugar Man: Sixto Rodriguez, absent winner of the Oscars
Posted on February 25, 2013 By Phillippe Diederich Movies

When the movie Searching for Sugar Man won the best documentary Oscar, it was not just a win for the filmmakers and for the subject of the film, Sixto Rodriguez; it was a win for art and poetry everywhere.......
http://www.voxxi.com/searching-for-sugar-man-sixto-rodriguez/

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Very well done. It flowed effortlessly.

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thanks for stopping go by Jeff most appreciated.
A message that resonates deeply, written in graceful language. I love these special touches: "kismet's alchemy" . . . "waltz w/o end" . . . & the last two lines are sweet & lingering . . . beautiful little lullaby.

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your comments . Take care will stop by soon.
wow, great start like how this piece just blends right in especially the part towards the in end about, how karma had played its part, excellent touch.

Posted 4 Years Ago


MOON

4 Years Ago

Thank you Mauricio, glad to see you around.
Take care
This piece has impact...love it in it's entirety, the links you provided added to the sheer enjoyment of this read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


MOON

4 Years Ago

Thanks Frieda for stopping by and reading the links too quite a story!
Take care
this so beautiful, even in its coldness...and there will be wine and roses, soon....seasons change, love changes us.

first line "the wind in the trees is rustling"

you put together some unbelievable phrasing here.

jacob

Posted 4 Years Ago


MOON

4 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob for your kind words.
"You were the open secret seemingly lost in time" good line Moon!

Posted 4 Years Ago


MOON

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Michael, always wait for your reviews and kind thoughts.
Michael Kevin Spencer

4 Years Ago

You do? Aw Moon you are just being nice!
MOON

4 Years Ago

Not at all , love your reviews always!
I love this! It's so nice and full of love! It's really heartfelt. Beautiful words...

Posted 4 Years Ago


MOON

4 Years Ago

Many thanks for your kind thoughts, most appreciated.
Take care!
Beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


MOON

4 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing Lorry , very happy to see you around again!
Distant horizons

4 Years Ago

:-)
This is a just awesome tribute!

Posted 4 Years Ago


MOON

4 Years Ago

Thanks Divya , most appreciated its a great story!
Love this as it dives straight into the deep warming my heart!

Posted 4 Years Ago


MOON

4 Years Ago

Thanks Priscilla, lovely comments, appreciate your thoughts.
Take care
Priscilla Sayers

4 Years Ago

You too! My pleasure:)

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