You

You

A Poem by MOON

 

I could dance under a shower of stars

Find you where sky meets the heart

Knowing life began when you rose

 The dawn of promise of a hopeful day

 

Still there are no casual words

That holds the breath of things

That describes the way the soul knows

That the given hour is racing to meet

 

The fire that breaths to life

The hope that swords the strife

Patches the wounds of a heart

 A balm that stills the bitter wind

 

You were the hour that changed all time

You the reason for the quiet ticking beat

Like the rose blooming in splendour

After a freezing winter of chilling bone

 

You are the song forever in tune

That sings endlessly in summer.

 


© 2015 MOON



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What a beautiful piece ...... I like how you placed elements of nature within your admiration for this person :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thanks , Nisreen most appreciated.take care.
Beautiful poem, full of great and touching images! Romantic above all! Congratulations!

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review. Go well
Very sweet love poem with lots of eloquent metaphors. Nice write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, take care.
A very sweet write. Some lines really stand out. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you take care!
This is so eloquent MOON
This stanza really hit me the most (in a good way lol)
"Still there are no casual words
That holds the breath of things
That describes the way the soul knows
That the given hour is racing to meet" - recalling as it does my favorite singer/songwriter and her penchant for such lyrical finesse. Your in great company in my mind now.
Thansk you for posting this one MOON
:))

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Ha, what a wonderful compliment, you too kind ...
ANTO

2 Years Ago

well deserved MOON, well deserved :)
MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you, take care!
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Moon I love your deep rich earthy spirit. It shines beautifully in your art :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thanks Lynn , likewise, take care!
I read your words.. so beautiful and free... and know that just one person can completely transform your world.. can make it deeper.. richer... can bring endless joy to light and darkness... Yes! "You were the hour that changed all time." That says it so well!

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thanks Craig always glad to see you stop by. Take care
Fabulous piece of work! If the recipient doesn't know his value after
this message, then WOW! I really enjoyed reading this, great flow
wording and even picture is great, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you, take care!
"You are the song forever in tune
That sings endlessly in summer"
Simply beautiful ...
_Beyourself



Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Beautiful and gentle words for love.
"You were the hour that changed all time
You the reason for the quiet ticking beat
Like the rose blooming in splendour
After a freezing winter of chilling bone"
The above lines stood out for me. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words, take care.,
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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