Return To Me

 

Return to me in love and dreams of what can be

Tell me all your hopes hung out on the line

Did I not once fly on wings or was I blind

Return and let me know what it is you feel

 

Return sketch winter leaves in shades of green

Tell me love is the song and on the world we dine

You are the purest crystal surely I can find.

On fresh air and hopes and ambience we lean

 

Return to me and I will forever believe

That you were the one so gracious and so fine

Return to me it’s everything and I won’t mind

Let me forget the spider’s web you once weaved.

 

 

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

An eloquent and elegant presentation.
Seemingly conciliatory; yet, it feels more like painful reverie than a offer of forgiveness.
In any event, "Return to Me" is an impressive piece of work!

[MOON]

Thank you, much obliged. Yup love has its price sometimes.

[Edis Radoncic]

"Let me forget the spider's web you once weaved". Forgiveness is always a struggle. Nice work!

[MOON]

Thanks Edis, keep well.

[emmajoy]

'Tell me love is the song and on the world we dine .. You are the purest crystal surely I can find.'

There's such a sad thread woven start to finish in this poem. You had love, you endured love, you treasured and wanted love.. but now - now you seem to look back on the telationship as being a trap,, a sort of dom:sub affair. I don't know.. not sure.

Your words are so finely and clearly displayed, you hold the interest and the curiosity all the way through.

[MOON]

Thanks Emma for your insightful comments, sometimes love comes at a price. Take care will stop by soon.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Forgiveness is sometimes the answer in relationships, other times it just brings more sadness.
Trust is something that must exist in relationship along with shared love and respect for each other.
We must support our loved ones and be understanding and giving daily.

Nice structure and very balanced.

[MOON]

Many thanks.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome! :)

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

"Sketch winter leaves in shades of green" be still my heart.....so beautiful! Lovely ink!

[MOON]

Thanks Jane, go well .

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes those relationships that seemed to have us trapped like a fly in a spider's web..could be the ones that we want back in the future...that person who actually gave us more than we knew...

don't know what you've got till it's gone.

[An owl on the moon]

So filled with an aching beauty to recapture the loving that once gave you wings. May you hear the song once more, and dance in this brilliant music of your soul.