Remembrance

Remembrance

A Poem by MOON




Remembrance

The soul is on fire the body gone

I raise my eyes to the sky, you the dawn

Each hour of the day reborn

You are the light that through all time shone

 

When I sit in the places you were

Every fragment of memory held dear

The good the bad all you feared

Were the fibres of life you steered

 

The footprint in my heart I see

The light will always be

The one that guides me to the shore

Anchoring my character at the core

 

Orphaned you held my hand, carried me

You outdid your past forever you are free


© 2016 MOON



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So many emotions are expressed nicely in this one. I truly liked this.

Posted 4 Months Ago


MOON

4 Months Ago

Thank you most appreciated.
Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

You're welcome. ☺
Thanks , punctuation there is a scary thing....

Posted 4 Months Ago


Solemn and utterly profound!! Fantastic! If I may be so bold as to suggest playing with punctuation simply to separate and emphasis the important thoughts. It would enrich the aesthetic and the flow. Well done!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Such tender reflections of a life so close, so giving, and now falling into the distance. But always the dearest lives live on in us. Always.

Posted 10 Months Ago


MOON

10 Months Ago

Always , always blessings Craig
Memories and places. Make us who we are.
"The footprint in my heart I see
The light will always be
The one that guides me to the shore
Anchoring my character at the core"
The above lines are true. We will follow the foot prints of elders and create our own. Life is constant lesson. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you Moon for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


MOON

10 Months Ago

Thank you appreciate your reviews.
Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

You are welcome dear friend.
What a beautiful sentiment of longing and missing someone.

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thank you for stopping by.
Excellent write!! Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your time most appreciated.
You anchor this beautiful write in love, in remembrance and in appreciation. Keep up the light and love in life. Excellent. ...:))))

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thanks Sami much appreciated. Take care.
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome .....:))))))

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