Eternity

Eternity

A Poem by MOON

Eternity

 Your grace is all I have now that you are gone
 I can see your face true love waiting to be reborn
 In the echoes, in the silence, in the dark
 I was shackled , you were the rainbows arc

 Grace is the heart that kept me from falling apart
Grace is in your stories your works of art
Grace walks with me through all time
Grace is the years you were all mine

 Love can flower on a barren plain
 Love can flower it has your name
 I can grieve for the loss of you
Yet you left vistas and a universal view

 That nothing dies when love is key
 You are invisible but eternally with me

© 2017 MOON



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That nothing dies when love is key
You are invisible but eternally with me...

this could be said as true love... the above lines :)
very beautifully done

Posted 10 Months Ago


MOON

10 Months Ago

Thank you , much appreciated
so much tenderness! lovely poem...
"You are invisible but eternally with me" - a beautiful image.

Posted 11 Months Ago


MOON

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
The last two lines are true and not sad. Being grateful for love even when it's gone is a maturity that some never achieve. Good on you.

Posted 11 Months Ago


MOON

11 Months Ago

He was precious, grateful for our time together.
MOON

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the review.
Grief is a tough thing to go through. It was for me and they'll be more in the near future.

The last two lines here are so appropriate and meaningful to read.

Great dedication Moon.

Posted 11 Months Ago


MOON

11 Months Ago

Thank you , kind Sir always good to hear from you.
the memories will last forever

Posted 11 Months Ago


MOON

11 Months Ago

Yes it does , miss the physical presence but better for knowing him.
Love the last two lines in this poem. It brings home the whole feeling of grief in this poem.

Posted 12 Months Ago


MOON

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
Deeply insightful--and truly lovely.
Profoundly touching, Moon!

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thank you kind sir, so good to see you around.
beautiful write, especially the third stanza...favorite.

I have some people who are still with me, even though they are not.

they will always be..."invisible but eternally with me"

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thanks Jacob always appreciate your comments
This is so beautifully woven. The recognition of the eternal in such a situation gives a soothing warmth, really liked this MOON :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thanks Poppy , will stop by soon take care.
There is grace in life, grace in love and grace in this heartfelt poem. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thank you Ted much appreciated.

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