Mother

Mother

A Poem by MOON

 

Paradise lies at the feet of thy mother

You were wonderfully rare like no other

All love and humour and oh so wise

Your spirit embraces and never dies

 

The essence your allure

The complexity that was you

You were the sunlit morning dew

The fiery autumn in all its hue

 

I kneel at your feet I hold you

In esteem in the court of the few

I embrace the soul ahead of your time

I am so honoured mother of mine

 

 You were a flower in crimson light

A rare butterfly in flight

You are the moon and the sun

Mischievous and so much of fun

 

I see you in everything

So free and on the wing

 

 


© 2017 MOON



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I didn't think it would, but it did remind of a Danzig song called "mother".

It's an awesome song, don't feel slighted.

You write well. It flows logically while being pleasant to read. That's not really an easy task if you ask me.

Posted 6 Months Ago


MOON

5 Months Ago

Thank you most appreciated.
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Pax
sooo lovely my friend, how your words ponder on the love that was given freely, a love like no other... wonderful!!!

Posted 8 Months Ago


MOON

7 Months Ago

Thanks Pax, nice seeing you around take care.
Very beautiful,loved it. This would make a awesome mothers day card!

Posted 8 Months Ago


MOON

8 Months Ago

Thank You , most appreciated.
A truly lovely ode; a more than fitting tribute.
Heartwarming, dear Moon!

Posted 8 Months Ago


MOON

8 Months Ago

Thanks kind Sir , hope you well.
Very simple you honored all our great mothers. In most beautiful way. How they can get .

Posted 10 Months Ago


MOON

8 Months Ago

Thank you most appreciated.
MOON

8 Months Ago

Thank you , I tried reviewing but see you closed your profile. Take care.
Your words of tribute are priceless! We can never be thankful enough for our precious mothers!
I feel as I've known your mother as you vividly remember her.......beautiful words!!
And the image you have posted is lovely...absolutely mesmerizing!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Mothers are precious. Straight from Heaven. Thank you for this touching tribute to all the angels on earth.

Posted 11 Months Ago


MOON

11 Months Ago

Thanks Divya.
DIVYA

11 Months Ago

You are welcome MOON...
very beautiful poem. A lovely tribute to a mother.


Posted 11 Months Ago


MOON

11 Months Ago

Thank you Angelina, truly appreciated.
Oh - this is so precious. A gorgeous tribute to your mother. Simply beautiful :) Julie

Posted 11 Months Ago


MOON

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much she was one of a kind.
What a heartfelt tribute to your mother. Indeed, each of us feels a mother's presence till the end of time. So sweet and meaningful. Lydi**

Posted 11 Months Ago


MOON

11 Months Ago

Thanks Lydia she was one of a kind , she is the invisible presence that guides me daily now.

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