Blue rain

Blue rain

A Poem by yuhee
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Soft raindrops kissed the hydrangea bloom

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Sweet hydrangea falls
and with kisses of March rain
Iulled me into sleep

© 2017 yuhee


Author's Note

yuhee
First haiku. First attempt xD

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Very good job. A complete poem in 13 words. Hard to do. I liked the journey leading to restful sleep. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


yuhee

7 Years Ago

Thank you for such kind comment. Means a lot to me
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome. I enjoyed your work.
this is great. the blue of hydrangeas, spring rains and being lulled to sleep by them. what's not to like? so peaceful and beautiful. this reads itself like a fantasy dream.

Posted 7 Years Ago


yuhee

7 Years Ago

Nothing can be peaceful than the soft patter of falling rain. Thanks for the review.
I can feel this! An amazing haiku :)
Good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


yuhee

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
I can see why, something so visually and audibly beautiful would me too, this is gorgeous :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


yuhee

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot.

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Added on February 28, 2017
Last Updated on February 28, 2017
Tags: Rain, Nature, Flower, Hydrangea, Nostalgic, March

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yuhee
yuhee

XII, Philippines



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