Heaven Would Be Hell

Heaven Would Be Hell

A Poem by MachinaWriter
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A poem...

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The gates of St. Peter
Would tarnish, if fate came to tell
That I was meant to pass
And you were stuck in hell

The golden streets would crumble
-and fade away to dust
The clouds above would rumble
-and thunder would combust.

Lightning would fall with rain,
The angels would start to cry
Heaven would never be the same
If you weren't there when I die.

At the golden gates, my soul I would sell
This I'll shout true
Because Heaven would be Hell
If I were there without you.

© 2012 MachinaWriter


Author's Note

MachinaWriter
Just another poem I wrote for my fiance. Wrote it kind of quickly, just as I woke up, so it kind of came out just as I typed it.

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Wouldn't it just be hell? I like this, though it scares me...

Posted 11 Years Ago


MachinaWriter

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I wrote this a while back...
Your have a gift for putting words together

Posted 11 Years Ago


ohoh

Posted 11 Years Ago


awww that's darling you wrote it for your fiance! I'm sure they'll love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Your poems tend to be about two things- your past, and your fiance. Both are such strong topics, and even writing about the same things, you bring something new to the table with every piece. Like I always say, I'm a big fan of your work, and you as a person. I think you're a great guy, and this poem furthers that thought. Beautifully written- it tugs the strings of the readers heart and makes them feel what the writer felt. Great job. x

Posted 11 Years Ago


MachinaWriter

11 Years Ago

Well, my poems are about two things. But in a way, I consider it to be about my past and my future. .. read more
Kelsey

11 Years Ago

That's a beautiful way to put it.
Shows just how much you love her. How even in the place, if you believe in it, that you should be the happiest and content, the high afterlife, would seem like hell without her. Well written, nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


MachinaWriter

11 Years Ago

Thanks man. I was gonna do more with it, but I felt like it was better like this, short and to the p.. read more
Awwwww. :) This is so sweet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


MachinaWriter

11 Years Ago

lol I thought so, too.

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MachinaWriter

Springfield, IL



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My original passion has always been in writing stories. Most of them were fantasy stories, because I always wanted to escape. That's what it was. An escape from the troubles of life. Joining this site.. more..

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