Crimson Embers

Crimson Embers

A Poem by mackenzi_drew

A homeless man
throws his ashes to the curb
I pass,
As crimson embers disperse
smoke wisps swirl
Into the darkness of the night
Slowly becoming extinguished
By the dampness
Of this chilly nights zephyr

© 2015 mackenzi_drew



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First I have a question; what is a zephyr? Second; I really liked the lines As crimson embers disperse Smoke wisps swirl.

Posted 2 Years Ago


mackenzi_drew

2 Years Ago

Hi! Thanks for your lovely comment. Zephyr is the wind :)
Daisygirl

2 Years Ago

Yay, new word for my vocabulary!

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Added on May 12, 2015
Last Updated on October 18, 2015
Tags: homeless, man, ashes, crimson, embers, smoke, darkness, night, dampness, chilly, zephyr

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mackenzi_drew
mackenzi_drew

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada



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Abstract/landscape painter, ukulele and guitar player, visitor of abandoned places, food lover, song/poem writer, photographer, coffee snob, museum/gallery browser, space geek, concert frequenter, lov.. more..

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