Chapter (4) BURGER BOY.

Chapter (4) BURGER BOY.

A Chapter by MAD ENGLISHMAN


 

I love to eat beef burgers

With cheese and salad too,

they come with lots of crispy fries

That are really great to chew.

 

My Mum she says that I'm naughty

For leaving on my plate,

All the little green bits

And sliced tomatoes that I hate.

 

When I drink too many Colas

They make me jump around

And sometimes when I fidget

I knock things on the ground.

 

The lady in the burger shop

Is really very kind

She cleans it up and tells my Mum

She really doesn't mind.

 

Yes folks we've all been there.



© 2019 MAD ENGLISHMAN


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MAD ENGLISHMAN
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I have experienced this as a parent and as an "innocent" bystander. I must admit I do like to visit a good burger joint now and again.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Man do I ever want a burger now, with cheese, a s**t load of cheese. HHHMMMMM................

Posted 9 Years Ago


MAD ENGLISHMAN

9 Years Ago

I'll bet you were that little boy.
Yes, we certainly have all been there--at least I have.
I think in the thind line of the first verse You should say "They" come with lots of crispy fries, because you usd the plural in the first line.
Also, Perhaps "The lady in (the) burger shop" would be better in the last verse. These are small tings, and I mention them only because I now you want real critiques of your work and not just passing praise.

Posted 9 Years Ago


MAD ENGLISHMAN

9 Years Ago

Yep, well done my dear friend. I'll correct that now.
Oi! That's my kid! LMAO :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


I don't really know why I like this poem., read it like 4 times and still want to read now... i guess some where deep down we all want to be kids and that's what this poem is making us feel like... Being a kid again!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


MAD ENGLISHMAN

9 Years Ago

I'm pleased you like it. I'm trying to write much simpler poetry just to make people smile more.

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MAD ENGLISHMAN
MAD ENGLISHMAN

Great Ponton, Lincolnshire, United Kingdom



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Heading for my 72nd birthday in April. I've enjoyed an eventful life. With the help of 2 wives I've managed to raise 3 children. Proud of my kids. I embrace all cultures but ultimately I'm proud to be.. more..

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