My Life is Darkness

My Life is Darkness

A Chapter by The Mad Prophet
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My Life is Darkness Part VI and Final Extension of I am the Darkness

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Now you have seen all there is to see of me
Are you scared of the dark yet?
No? Now I have to explain this again
 
You might have had a bad life too
But the darkness amplified mine
You might have had it rough
That does not make it any more right
To labor you with more problems
Like dealing with me
That doesn’t give you the right
To know my truth
My weakness and my flaw
This does not make it the more easier to corrupt you
To change the very state of your self being
To better myself, when myself means nothing
For my family and my... well people I know
I never gave you consent to care about me
You need my permission first
And this is my point
I watch over you, but only from the shadows
I make sure your safe, but you can’t rely on me
You shouldn’t put your faith in nothing
I was never here to begin with
It would hurt if you put your faith in me
I am too deep of an abyss to fall into
But thanks to you all I have learned this
I must watch were I stand more carefully
Because I wouldn’t want anything to become of you
The way people are is perfectly fine
As long as they don’t tred my path
So please understand
 
Now you have seen all there is to see of me
Stay afraid of the dark
Because the light is all you know


© 2008 The Mad Prophet


Author's Note

The Mad Prophet
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/MadProphet/272989/ for part 5

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Ahh my god this was mindblowing how it advanced and this was one of the best reads. You really put it out there for us and I, for one feel lucky to have had this chance to try and tap into your world. The darkside is a wonderful place to walk through, isn't it.
I am glad to have found you.
Write hard!
G.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The grand finale... brilliant...!
I loved reading these poems. So intense and deep.
You express wonderfully and with such originality. Really great work ;)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nope..you havent scared me off...Great job with this one as well...keep up the grea writing for you have a fan in me....=)

Your friend Berserk..=)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is like a poetic story of warning, of truth, yet reaching out
for something you yearn. Thank you for your reviews on my poems.
AD

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well written...I really enjoyed this read, how dark and your play on words ever so descriptive! please keep on writing (-:

Posted 15 Years Ago


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