Path of Enlightenment

A little of Spirituality, and a little of Blasphomy. Only one weakness though, words from those I barrow strenght from. People I have to put stalk into, but tend to lash at me, or say things that stay with me forever.

 

You see me, the quite stranger

I see you, the quite mind

I walk pass you, my feet on the ground

A man without shoes, he must be out of his mind

 

I feel the Earth aiding me

The energy flowing into my feet

The attunement to the magnetic pulse

Of Gaia’s ever stronger life force

And I am a part of this stream

And I am aware of this flow

As all my Chakra’s open

And the sun grants me extra energy

And my mind flows inward

Inward deep into my soul

As my image of reality formulates

Then presses onto this fabricated world

As the sun and the moon greet at a distance

And both aid me at in my will

And as my will becomes one with the Earth

And the Cosmos becomes one with me

The image released from the 3^rd eye

As my soul resonates with my surroundings

My image is now real

And you just blinked

 

I am the quite stranger you would never know

I am the law, and dreams of my soul

My will is my law, and none can rival

Now even God can't stand in my path

I am Enlightened, for now I can see

The light does not blind me

But your words can scare me

Reviews

[Dorchadas]

Wow you have managed so well to put into words so many of the thoughts that flow through my mind.
I can't even descibe how it felt reading this. It's so beautiful and thought provoking.
There's also an intensity here that almost brings the piece to life... maybe it's the rythmn or the flow... I'm not sure but it's hypnotic. Wow.

[poet2angels (lynda)]

Very unique portrait you paint of yourself...
Ty for entering!

Lynda

[Panda]

Very well done, nice flow and intense and descriptive. I enjoyed reading this piece, and I loved how you used colors here. Great job, as always ;).

[Mysty Rayn]

This poem really opens up the mind. Well done.

[Pointblank]

I see you know yourself all too well. From the bottom of your feet to the top of your head you got whats goin on. But her..you only see the outside..her quietness, her eyes blink and your scared she may hurt you with words. Why so Intimidated? My thoughts anyway. I liked this read.

[Lana123]

I love the last two verses. "your light does not blind me but your words can scare me." It really captures feelings that some of us have if a person gets to close. Scared to let them see the dark parts, scared to let them see our fears, our weaker side. Scared to let them into a place that they may use against us. Then to have a person say just the right thing and we want to high tail it out of here cause we know if we don't then we surrender a part of ourselves to them. At least that's what I get out of it.

[Angel Bird]

Wow! You describe here all I feel very often myself. While reading, strangely enough I can feel radiations and vibrations going out of your piece.
Your lines and words have a powerful effect on me, as if you'd speak about my emotions here and not about your own one's. Seems as if somehow we could be kindred souls.

Impressive write. Kudos!

[angelina neves]

Wonderful feeling : "As the sun and the moon greet at a distance/And both aid me at in my will/ And as my will becomes one with the Earth/ And the Cosmos becomes one with me" !!! And as for me, like you, there is no god that could stand in my path also!
And there are many words that scare me when i try to see what they mean in the minds of some people and how they can go and move people to do horrible things to other human beeings with some "justification" of good or evil....
beautiful!