Self Replicate, Then Decimate

Inspired by Industrial Music, and Emily Rose (A Writer on here) who wrote a pantoum and I thought it would be fun. This poem is about human cycles, the Human Machine!

 

I must try to understand their fascination with reconstruction

I am now self replicating

I must figure out all of this process

I need to visually attract a recipient to accompany me

 

I am now self replicating

 

I am displaying a stimulant in which they like

 

I need to visually attract a recipient to accompany me

I am now a visual display for there liking

 

I am displaying a stimulant in which they like

I can now proceed with Interrogations

I am now a visual display for there liking

I think she will do for this session

 

I can now proceed with Interrogations

I need to ask her of her errors

I think she will do for this session

“Hello, good evening we are having?”

 

I need to ask her of her errors

I need to know her flaws inside

“Hello, good evening we are having?”

“I found you attractive, would you like to go on a date?”

 

I need to know her flaws inside

Is she capable of maintaining another system?

“I found you attractive, would you like to go on a date?”

Now I analyze her attentions

 

Is she capable of maintaining another system?

Is she capable of building another system?

Now I analyze her attentions

I will now engage in system interaction

 

Is she capable of building another system?

She seems to be of best quality, compared to other systems

I will now engage in system interaction

I have now downloaded her manufacture code, and information

 

She seems to be of best quality, compared to other systems

She seems to have all the necessary part required

I have now downloaded her manufacture code, and information

She is now ready for being used

 

She seems to have all the necessary part required

I will now engage in system interface

She is now ready for being used

I am ready for uploading a copy of my program

 

I will now engage in system interface

Self replicate, then decimate

I am ready for uploading a copy of my program

As I use her system for reconstruction

 

Self replicate, then decimate

I must try to understand their fascination with reconstruction

As I use her system for reconstruction

I need to visually attract a recipient to accompany me

 

Reviews

[Suhcej]

I don't know if that's how men see it, but this was a clever way to put it written
It sounds really technological or maybe the best to describe it is robotical
the repetition of each phrase in the right moment gave it a sense of certain malfunction, but I don't know if that was the way you wanted it to be
Overal, it is a very good writing, Congrats! very good
keep writing

[DANGER]

Industrial is good for the magic in writing, that's cool. This poem thing is more cool than anything. Have you ever watched The Meaning of Life?

I hope Fate hears you!

[TamiViolet]

Fascinating. Analogy is thought - provoking and brilliant. Humans as machines, sometimes it seems that way. Repetition enhances theme quite well, Mad Prophet.

Self replicate, then decimate.

What a notion! Exceptional read.

[Pointblank]

Wow, you got that all down and it actually made sense to me. Im sure thats exactly how men see it. Self replicate then decimate.