Lovely Stray

For Kelly Catherine. February 16th, 2009.

Patched up dresses.

Long, fluffy ears.

Skipping through town.

Living the years.

 

Smile that enchants.

High socks slightly torn.

Temper with pressure.

Be warned.

 

Tail long and still.

Eyes like the sun.

Pale hands that shake.

Too unsure for her gun.

 

Innocent face.

A hunger for sweets.

Does she sound so bad?

She's not fit for the streets.

 

Hiding in trees.

Sleeping all day.

I know it quite odd.

But she's a lovely stray.

Reviews

[The Water Queen]

Creative and lovely. The voice in very independant and strong.

[Aurora Night]

Very creative. I love your voice in this poem. You make the poem come to life and paint a picture in the readers head. great work, i'd love to read more of your writing.

[reca-becca]

Good Poem "Victoria" ;) This username is listed in your school adgenda. I bet you know who this is!!!!!

Good Poem! Kepp writting!
love,
becca

p.s. will u request me as a friend? I don't know how to. hee hee!

[Smile It's Megan&hearts..]

luved it :O

[Eidolon Michael]

Very nice, it kinda tells a story.(Sorry, I'm no good at reviewing poems, but I try my best!)
"Is it a sin to be weak-hearted? Not everyone's strong. Not everyone can stand being despised"
-Mithos Yggdrasil

[Kelly Catherine.]

I lufss it Vivi! This is giving me quite the inspiration for a new project >:3