For everything, thank you

As I walked you crossed my mind

You were so kind

I was so blind

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Absolutely surprised

You were there and smiled

I remembered and almost cried

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Everything we discussed

Loudly we laughed

A lot we talked

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Always a special pleasure

Nothing to measure

Like treasure

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My insecurity you noticed

For the reason you asked

My answer you enjoyed

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Nothing will make it undone

Nothing will change the present 

Nothing will hold me in this state

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Your sentimets I knew

Our chances I blew

At last I grew

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A part of me will always love you 

I wish all the happiness in the world for you

For everything, thank you

Reviews

[Kenneth Anstiss]

Very frank poem about what can happen in Special relationships,Will take A look at your other work,your Poem would make most people Think about past loves and what they have learnt by them very thoughtful and well written.

[Davidgeo]

'Loundly' should probably be loudly (2nd line 3rd stanza)

[LadyT]

Yes, thank you.

[Ghost writer]

that's sweet and sad, I like the first verse, it's like a friendship that had to end, but it's okay, because you still have the memories of all the good.

[LadyT]

I do, he was my first love and good friend until it turned into something more I wasn't ready for, because of trust issues.

[Ghost writer]

I have those too, don't tend to make friends very well, surely don't seem to be able to keep them. Sorry, at least you can write about it.

[Samuel Dickens]

Excellent. Not everyone can look back on a relationship that didn't last and find value in the experience. Perhaps doing so is a sign of maturity?

[LadyT]

Thank you!
I would hope this is a sign of maturity.