In the darkness of the night

In the darkness of the night

A Poem by Magdelena
"

Sometimes within ourselves comes everlasting peace..

"





In the darkness of the night
I search for you
My hands feeling the walls
Of your mind.

Your thoughts
I softly touch
Flooding them with everlasting light
Let them carry you I say.

Along the path of moments of peace
To sanction, surreal dreams
Wonder of all tomorrows
Take away your deepest sorrows.

Softly I sooth you..
Caressing your inner memory
Of a simple moment in time
Captured of the utmost joy.

'Remember'
I softly whisper.

Like a breeze
I am.

Feel me move past you?
Within you?

The flames softly flickering
In your thoughts.

Of me
Of peace
Dreams of treasured thoughts
Distant music of far-away lands.

Hear it,
Playing softly?
Over and over again
Soothing your every senses.

Listen..

Ahhh, yes...
Close your eyes
Let it gently caress the darkness around.

Oh the sweetness it brings...

Play on..

Play on..

Yes...

In the darkness of the night
I search for you.

My hands feeling the walls
Of your mind.
 

© 2012 Magdelena



Author's Note

Magdelena
www.johnpicacio.com/2009 Artist_John Picacio’s dreamscape for George Alex Effinger’s A Thousand Deaths.

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Beautiful writing on this piece.


Posted 3 Years Ago


Tate sent me a Request and I'm glad he did. Amazing, the imagery thought provoking with a double edge sword meaning this poem could be read with several different visualizations. Love it!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Magdelena

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the read and lovely comment. And I so thank Tate for sending you. He is a grea.. read more
Beautiful imagery, wonderfully penned. One of my favorites!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Magdelena

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for such a great comment.. Much appreciated my friend!

~Mags~
I extend my gratitude to Tate for sending me this read request for I am filled with utter delight upon the reading. The lines...
"Softly I sooth you..
Caressing your inner memory
Of a simple moment in time
Captured of the utmost joy."
...quenched my parched spirit and leaves me wanting to read more of your enchanting work.


Posted 4 Years Ago


Magdelena

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your read and KIND review. I am deeply grateful... xo
IT WAS AMAZING.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow! I like the imagery and the way this poem is set on the page.. Great piece Magdelena.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Soothing and lovely. Great job as usual. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


this poem has beautiful imagery, "my hands feeling the walls of your mind" is a great line

Posted 5 Years Ago


WOW! That's about all I can say. This is very moving!

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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