Hello there big boy!

Hello there big boy!

A Poem by Magdelena
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And a 'boop boop de doop' to all of you!!!

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Hello there big boy!
Fancy a dance?
A little romance?
A walk in the park,
when it's nice and dark?

A bite to eat?
My treat..
Or maybe just a nice chat,
How about that?

I can 'boop boop de doop'
Dance through a loop
Sing like a star
Be wherever you are.

Make you feel right
All through the night
Keep you nice and warm
Cuddle close to your form

Cook a mean cuisine
Eggs over easy..Bacon nice and lean
For nothing's too good
For my man, this I would.

So Hello there big boy!
Fancy a dance?
A little romance?

Come on honey
Just take a chance...

 

 

 

 

Copyright © 2009 MoonStar Rose
 

© 2009 Magdelena


Author's Note

Magdelena
['Pic of Betty Boop']

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Betty Boop the icon of what all women desired to be aka the pre Marilyn Monroe. To strut your stuff and please your man, make him eat right out of your hand. A playful and yet sensual writing about being a woman that is sure enough of herself to make the first move! Your talented pen served well on this humorous piece. Loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Ohlalala and hotchacha, damn girl you make me want to dance with you charming words... very inviting indeed.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked the rhyme and the message of this. A nice light mood and a flirty feel! I love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very cute piece its cool how you can switch back and forth between dark and light writes.... overall a very fun piece... liked it alot!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! sensually humorous and clever. I think that was Mae West's line, or something similar to that.

Antony



Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is adorable. I like the Betty Boop feel to it. It was a wonderfully fun piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

wHAT MAN WOULD RESIST THAT OFFER


Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Betty Boop the icon of what all women desired to be aka the pre Marilyn Monroe. To strut your stuff and please your man, make him eat right out of your hand. A playful and yet sensual writing about being a woman that is sure enough of herself to make the first move! Your talented pen served well on this humorous piece. Loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oooooh how delightfully cute and flirty~ a real fun piece here sis,

enjoyed the boopsy- booper lines `nicely donE!!

Thanks for sharing1

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is on par for your "humorious" writes, Not as good as your "E" poems, but not bad It did bring a grin

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love this write! Thanks for sharing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 25, 2009

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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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